Adultery I Orchestrated my Wife's Cheating, but Why? [Completed - 27 Chapters]
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(12-12-2025, 08:04 AM)PELURI Wrote: well written....the ending could have been either way....certain compromise is felt in ending the story by surviving Arjun....hope you'll not stop here....a small suggestion....this is primarily a forum for erotic stories....readers do expect that at reasonable frequency and intensity....erotica need not be crude laced with unnecessary expletives....erotica of high literary standards,  graceful situations and intense emotions, titillating stimulations creates a master piece of erotica....appreciate efforts and good luck for the next one...


Thanks for the feedback.. I'm just a beginner here in the platform.. Yes the compromise is that Arjun had different ending.but. i just want to see him happy for his selfless love. nothing else.. and i will try to match the standards you mentioned..
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