11-12-2025, 09:09 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-12-2025, 10:23 PM by PELURI. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
great beginning bro!...the narration is fluid and effort less...good command of the language....promising endless ecstacy...keep situations real and reactions natural and grounded...easy to connect...built up steam slow fire...sure to blast...pictures would add glitter....good luck


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