[qazmlp]

Also, I am glad you chose not to add any college stuff of Kriti's as that may have unnecessarily added characters or situations to the story that were not needed. Your 2-3 days of non-stop writing has really come out very well, especially this latest update on the backstory/flashback as I feel this is your forte.
But the previous update on the mindless gangbang of Kriti, while very relevant to the story, as also Steamy and hott, did not really bring out much of your skills in it. Don't take it in a wrong way, but your two consecutive nights of Supriya-Iqbal passion were much more erotic and I had to read them so slowly to savor every moment of the passion unfolding. So that really sets the ceiling so high in terms of what you are capable of and this gangbang really did not stand any comparison to that one. It's your ability to write the heck out of such emotional and dramatic situations that really sets you apart.