10-12-2025, 10:01 AM
Yeah, I am really glad with how Atul's story has neatly been taken to it's conclusion with Disha.But just one observation there which I feel you can cover in the future scene or two that you plan for Atul.
You managed to show how a deeply emotional, shy n timid person like Atul needed a lady like Disha to really come out with his basest feelings n open his heart out.But I feel it was not quite clear why Disha needed a guy like Atul,what was her predicament or mental scars that found solace when she met a guy of Atul's sweet,shy,under confident and unexpressive nature.
You managed to show how a deeply emotional, shy n timid person like Atul needed a lady like Disha to really come out with his basest feelings n open his heart out.But I feel it was not quite clear why Disha needed a guy like Atul,what was her predicament or mental scars that found solace when she met a guy of Atul's sweet,shy,under confident and unexpressive nature.


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