10-12-2025, 01:19 AM
(10-12-2025, 12:49 AM)lovelyrao Wrote: They are driving in the night so that makes sense but I still feel little , Ravi has to turn if he has to use his both hands which is very risky if Amit turns back little by any chance and thats where we tend to do so that we get maximum feeling/satisfaction.
Anyway, Than you for such a long reply with detailed explanation. Sorry(have less patience to go through such long explanation).
I generally go straight to the point and miss the polite part of it so please do not mind. After all, this is one of the place where everyone can be as they are and as they like.
Dear Sir,
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts so candidly.
I understand your point, in that situation, Ravi turning even slightly could feel risky, especially if Amit unexpectedly turns back. Your observation makes sense, and I appreciate you mentioning it. These small, realistic details actually help me refine the scenes better.
At the same time, I feel that a little bit of risk is what makes certain moments more thrilling.
We all naturally gravitate toward things that feel slightly dangerous, not enough to harm us, but just enough to raise the heartbeat. Whether it's breaking a rule, sneaking a glance, or doing something we know we shouldn’t… that tiny edge of uncertainty creates an adrenaline rush.
That is exactly why scenes involving Ravi and Priya with Amit being around, become more exciting.
Their actions carry that hint of risk, that awareness that someone might turn back or something might go wrong. It adds tension, anticipation, and intensity, emotions people deeply connect with in storytelling. If everything were perfectly safe, controlled, and predictable, half the magic would be gone.
And honestly, that’s the same reason people often find fictional romance with a neighbor’s wife more exciting than romance with their own spouse.
It’s not about the person, it’s about the forbidden feeling, the unpredictability, the danger, the “what if.”
That element of risk creates a spark that everyday life doesn’t always offer.
And please don’t worry about the long explanation, I only wanted to make sure I responded with clarity.
You don’t need to be sorry at all.
I completely respect your style of getting straight to the point.
You are absolutely right, this is a space where everyone can be themselves, express freely, and enjoy the stories in their own way. I’m glad you felt comfortable enough to share your honest perspective.
Thank you again for taking the time to share your feedback so openly.
It truly helps me grow as a writer.
Warm regards,
-- Shailu


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