Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

Hello Madam,


I disappeared from the site for a few days… and I return only to find you already on page 89.
Are you by any chance the cousin sister of Usain Bolt?
Because the speed at which you write could put even lightning to shame!

And what is this mysterious bond between Ravi’s luck, romance, and motor vehicles?

Someone please whisper to him that his destiny seems to be tied to wheels —
whether it’s the first encounter in the auto, or that unforgettable moment in the Mini Cooper,
which felt like he had hit the jackpot of his lifetime. Now I’m wondering…
will the final moments also take place in a vehicle? Only Madam’s secret vault of imagination knows!

Your narration has a mood of its own like standing alone on a vast open beach,
clouds gathering above, hinting at rain. A soft wind curls around the body,
sending a gentle shiver that is both thrill and anticipation. You don’t know when the rain will fall,
but you feel it approaching, and that waiting itself becomes a pleasure,
a quiet trembling in the calm before the downpour.

That is what your story feels like a beautiful romance  in slow motion.

Right now, Madam, we are all on a roller coaster holding tight to the safety bar with white knuckles, laughing, trembling, thrilled  and yet, the ride never seems to end.
Only you can decide when to pull the brakes. But until then, we are more than happy to keep spinning and soaring with every twist of your sentences.

Through your words, we slip into Ravi’s world so completely that it feels like a kind of parakaya pravesam stepping into another soul, another body, another breath to experience the warmth of Priya’s nearness, the softness of her presence, her tender skin ,  the firmness of her globes, the subtle stir of emotions that Ravi himself feels.

But Madam… please remember, we readers also have a life outside Ravi’s body!
If you keep us trapped inside his emotions for too long, we might forget our own!

So whenever you feel the moment is right, release us gently back into our ordinary world.
Until then, let your story carry us like a tender tide pulling us farther into its depths.

You are  such a bad habbit , making me to come  to the site  every day.   But  I  love to visit and see the updates. 

Thanks for the romantic Journey. 

Hi Siva Reddy Sir

I am incredibly grateful for your thoughtful and detailed feedback. To receive such a message from someone whose writing and insight I admire is truly an honor, and I cannot express enough how much it means to me. Your words are not just feedback but a beautiful reflection of the connection you've made with my story. It is not every day that a writer receives such profound and evocative observations, and I am honestly humbled by the time you've taken to read so carefully, to follow the twists and turns, and to deeply engage with Ravi's world.
 
You’ve made me laugh with your playful reference to Usain Bolt. If only my writing could match his speed in real life, then I’d never run out of words. Now, the mysterious bond between Ravi’s luck, romance, and vehicles, what an astute observation. Hahaha, I am not going to reveal how the final action with Priya will end up and where, as I’d love to keep it as a mystery for now. One thing I can tell you now is that Ravi is going to grow closer with Priya Didi.
 
Your description of my narrative as a mood of its own, like standing on a vast open beach with the sky gathering in anticipation, was so beautiful that I had to stop for a moment and savor it. This makes me more careful before writing further. You are setting higher standards for me, and I have to make sure I don’t disappoint you. I think this is what draws me to romance: the slow build of emotions, the calm before the storm, the gentle tension that comes from the quiet spaces between characters. It's a delicate balance, and I love that kind of romance.
 
And then your metaphor of the roller coaster, wow. What a perfect way to describe the ride that I hope my readers experience.
 
Your description of stepping into Ravi’s world is something I will cherish. The sense of complete immersion, the way you feel his emotions, his longing, and the intensity of his experiences, it’s the kind of connection I always hope for in my writing. Even if I could achieve just 1 percent of that, I would be more than happy.
 
The fact that my story has become a "bad habit" for you, one that you look forward to every day, is honestly the greatest compliment I could ever receive. To know that my words have become something you eagerly anticipate, that they’ve found a place in your daily rhythm, fills me with gratitude. I will do my best to keep you coming back, page after page, because knowing that you are enjoying this journey with me is what makes the work all the more worthwhile.
 
Lastly, thank you for appreciating the romance that’s unfolding. This journey has been as much a discovery for me as I hope it is for you. I am truly grateful for your kind words and your support, and I promise to continue weaving this story with all the love and care it deserves.
 
Once again, thank you for your incredible feedback, sir. It’s a treasure to me, and I will carry it with me as I continue to craft the story. I truly admire your writing skills, and reading your comments on my story means the world to me.
 
With sincere gratitude and excitement for what’s to come
 
-- Shailu