Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

How Can Ravi use his both hands or one hand while sitting next to Priya without being noticed by Driver / Her husband ? Can anyone share some photo similar to the scene ?

Hi Lovelyrao

First of all, thank you so much for your thoughtful question,  It’s clear that you’re paying great attention to the details, and I really appreciate that. It’s questions like these that show you’re deeply engaged with the story, which is exactly what any writer hopes for. I loved being able to craft a scene with these subtle dynamics, and your curiosity about how Ravi could act without being noticed shows that you’re really picking up on the little things, which is always exciting as a writer.
 
Now, regarding your question: How can Ravi use his both hands on Priya Didi, without being noticed by Amit, who is driving the car? Here’s how I envision the scene playing out, considering all the elements at play:
 
1. Amit’s Focus and Mood:

• Amit is not suspicious of anything happening between Ravi and Priya. He’s simply driving, still reflecting on the movie they watched, and possibly feeling frustrated because of the coke spill on him and the seat next to him and also by the busy streets. His mind is preoccupied with the drive, the traffic, and maybe even his own thoughts. The idea of anything unusual happening in the back seat is the furthest thing from his mind.
  
  
• He’s not looking back at the rearview mirror with any suspicion, and he’s not worried about what might be going on in the back. Unless something loud or sudden catches his attention, he wouldn’t feel the need to glance back. So, Ravi and Priya can easily get away with their quiet, discreet actions without raising any red flags for Amit.
  

 
2. The Role of the Romantic Songs:

• One of the key elements that I wanted to weave into this scene is the atmosphere created by the romantic songs playing in the car. The music helps to set a relaxed, intimate vibe, and it adds to the mood of the moment. With these romantic tunes filling the car, it becomes easier for Ravi to move subtly without drawing attention.
  
  
• The soft background music would also mask any small noises from the back seat, making it even less likely that Amit would notice anything happening. It’s these kinds of atmospheric details that help create the environment for the scene and explain why Amit is more absorbed in the drive and the music than in what’s happening behind him.
  

 
3. The Rearview Mirror and Night Mode:

• The auto-dimming rear-view mirror in the Mini Cooper at night is another important factor. At night, the mirror dims to reduce glare from headlights behind the car, which makes it harder for Amit to clearly see what’s happening in the back seat. Even if Ravi is using his hands or making small movements, the mirror likely won’t reflect them with much detail.
  
  
• This dimmed view ensures that any subtle actions in the back seat are less noticeable to Amit. With the limited visibility from the rear-view mirror and the night-time driving conditions, the back seat remains mostly out of his view, even if Ravi is being discreet.
  

 
4. Positioning of Ravi and Priya:

• Ravi and Priya’s seating arrangement also plays a role. Ravi is sitting next to Priya, and she is sitting directly behind Amit. This positioning makes it easy for Ravi to engage in small movements with his hands without Amit noticing.
  
  
• If Ravi’s hands are close to Priya, near the seat divider or armrest, the tight interior of the Mini Cooper makes it easier to keep things subtle. Priya, who is seated right behind Amit, can naturally shift or position herself in a way that blocks his view, further helping Ravi keep his actions discreet.
  
  
• If you remember the lines I used in the scene 
  
  "Ravi shifted to clear a comfortable space beside him, the air in the Mini Cooper growing warmer with each breath. Priya slid in next to him, and the faint scent of jasmine perfume immediately flooded his senses. "
  
  Ravi didn't actually move to the other side, he just shifted enough to give her a comfortable space beside him. She was sitting right next to him.  
  
  
• Even if Ravi leans in or subtly moves his hands, Priya’s body could cover these actions from Amit’s perspective. Since Amit’s attention is focused on the road, this becomes a perfect opportunity for Ravi to engage in actions that wouldn’t be immediately visible to him.
  

 
5. Amit’s Lack of Suspicion:

• The most important factor in this scene is that Amit is completely unaware of any potential interaction between Ravi and Priya. He has no reason to be suspicious, he’s simply driving, and the thought of anything happening in the back seat doesn’t even cross his mind. He’s absorbed in the task of driving and the music, creating a relaxed atmosphere where he doesn’t feel the need to pay attention to what’s happening behind him.
  
  
• Even though Ravi and Priya might be engaging in something subtle, like using their hands or turning toward each other, the environment is such that Amit’s mind is elsewhere. He is not thinking about the possibility of anything unusual, and unless something loud or sudden happens, like a sudden sound or movement, he wouldn’t think to glance back at the back seat.
  

 
 
Photo/Scene Reference:
 
To help paint a picture, imagine this:
 

• Priya is sitting quietly behind Amit, perhaps looking out the window, her attention absorbed in the soft music. Ravi, seated next to her, is angled toward her, his hand subtly moving or resting near her in a way that Amit wouldn’t notice.
  
  
• The romantic songs are playing in the background, filling the car with a relaxed, intimate atmosphere, helping to mask any small sounds.
  
  
• Amit is driving, focused on the road, the busy streets, and his own thoughts. The rearview mirror is dimmed in night mode, offering a limited view of the back seat.
  
  
• Amit’s attention is fully on driving, so unless there’s a loud or sudden noise, he wouldn't look back.
  

 
With the combination of Amit’s lack of suspicion, the auto-dimming mirror, the romantic music, and the close positioning of Ravi and Priya, their actions go unnoticed. The scene is designed to be subtle, with tension building quietly while Amit remains blissfully unaware.
 
As I am learning to write, I always strive to pay close attention to the details because those are the elements that really bring a scene to life. When crafting this particular moment, I made sure to consider how a driver’s frustration and focus on the road can make him completely blind to things happening right in front of him. It’s a well-known fact that when people are frustrated or distracted, they often miss things that are right in their field of vision. There are numerous YouTube videos and real-life examples showing how drivers, especially in traffic or during late-night drives, become so absorbed in their thoughts or the driving task itself that they don’t even see things happening right in front of them. So, Amit, in his frustration and with his attention on navigating the busy streets, wouldn’t notice anything happening silently in the back seat, especially given that it’s a blind spot for him in the dimmed rearview mirror. The idea of Amit noticing subtle movements without any noise is highly unlikely, unless he’s already suspicious of Ravi and Priya, something he definitely isn’t.
 
As for the relationship dynamics, I wanted to explore how the fact that Amit, Ravi, and Priya live in the same house influences the situation. Amit works every day, while Ravi works from home on Tuesdays and Thursdays. So on those days, Priya and Ravi are alone at home, and if they wanted to do anything, Amit wouldn’t have any clue about it. Amit is so confident about trusting Ravi in his house with his wife that it reflects his peace of mind and his belief that nothing is happening behind his back. He’s not looking for anything, and in his mind, there’s no reason to question anything. If a man feels comfortable enough to let someone stay alone in his house with his wife without suspicion, you can imagine just how blissfully unaware he is. The confidence in his own life and relationships contributes to his complete lack of vigilance, and in this case, it makes him miss the most subtle interactions in the back seat.
 
Once again, thank you for your insightful question! It’s great to know that you’re paying attention to these details, it really means a lot. Creating this scene was all about balancing the subtlety of their actions with Amit’s distraction and lack of suspicion. The romantic songs, the tight car interior, and the dimmed rearview mirror were all elements I considered to make this moment feel natural while still allowing Ravi and Priya to act discreetly. If you’re interested, I’d be happy to explain more of my thought process behind this scene, as I really enjoy diving into these creative choices
 
With warm regards

-- Shailu
 

PS: Wow! I surprised myself with this one, this is the longest response I’ve ever written for feedback.