04-07-2019, 11:31 AM
(04-07-2019, 10:36 AM)Nasheeliaankhein Wrote: Dear Writer
The story is very good . . . . . . . . . but truly feeling like this story is on ventilator, you are surely wasting your precious time by giving slow updates . . . . . . actually very very . . . very slow updates.
If you have less time then finish the story in 2-3 updates by giving it a suitable end.
Its a true feedback, don't take it otherwise, please.
Thanks for your comment