Incest Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale
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so he progressed to porn and now imagining THE LADY of the house in all kind of compromising positons, i guess it's all happening to soon.

I remembered reading it's going to be a slow burn, in my opinion no son actually have sexual thoughts for thier mother, it's always the idea of forbidden fruit but not the actual person.

I would have loved to see this story unfolding in a lot slower pace for the attraction towards the opposite sex to turn into sexual thoughts that too actually on a real family member.

from kartik's perspective being appreciative of his mother's beauty and getting attracted towards her is one thing but within a couple of updates he has started imagining her sexually sucking, fucking is a little bit early and fast paced, could have been a slow burn.

but hey I enjoyed your writing and every part of the story as it is, I know advising others is easy rather doing it oneself. do not take this in a negative way, I really like this story and its character and storyline.

looking forward. good work. appreciate it
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RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Akhilaa - 05-12-2025, 12:11 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by xfirefox - 07-12-2025, 10:17 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by BiratKj - 08-12-2025, 09:41 AM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by BiratKj - 08-12-2025, 07:49 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Sage_69 - 31-12-2025, 02:03 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Sage_69 - 06-01-2026, 07:01 AM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by dk1235 - 16-01-2026, 06:28 AM



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