04-07-2019, 10:36 AM
Dear Writer
The story is very good . . . . . . . . . but truly feeling like this story is on ventilator, you are surely wasting your precious time by giving slow updates . . . . . . actually very very . . . very slow updates.
If you have less time then finish the story in 2-3 updates by giving it a suitable end.
Its a true feedback, don't take it otherwise, please.
The story is very good . . . . . . . . . but truly feeling like this story is on ventilator, you are surely wasting your precious time by giving slow updates . . . . . . actually very very . . . very slow updates.
If you have less time then finish the story in 2-3 updates by giving it a suitable end.
Its a true feedback, don't take it otherwise, please.
नशीली आँखें
वो प्यार क्या जो लफ्ज़ो में बयाँ हो
प्यार वो है जो आँखों में नज़र आए!!
वो प्यार क्या जो लफ्ज़ो में बयाँ हो
प्यार वो है जो आँखों में नज़र आए!!
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