Adultery Ruby - the Wanton Flower

[tweeny_fory]

This erotica was an absolute triumph, captivating me from beginning to end with its sheer brilliance and undeniable allure. 
I wholeheartedly loved every moment, finding myself completely immersed in its rich narrative. While the story's overall linear progression was effective, I did have a minor suggestion for future installments. 

The penultimate episode, which delved into Ruby's encounter with her uncle and subsequently detailed the events, followed a similar chronological approach. 

The final episode, however, offered a compelling blend of present-day action and reflective flashbacks, a creative choice that I appreciated for its attempt to add a unique dimension to the storytelling. 

To elevate this exceptional narrative even further, I believe a more expansive exploration of certain certain details would have been beneficial. For instance, specifying the swimwear worn when she joins for the swimming lessons, or elaborating on the circumstances under which a bra was removed or lost, would have amplified the sensory experience for the reader. 

As a newfound admirer of your work, this is simply a friendly suggestion. 

Perhaps a future episode could feature Rahul and Sumit engaging in a detailed conversation, recounting the pool incident to their friend, allowing readers to savor such moments with even greater depth and enjoyment.


Keep rocking bro