Adultery Geetha ~ teacher

[yenjvoy]

This is such a beautifully written as well as well crafted story. Your understanding of dialog is just amazing. I'm really enjoying this one and hope you can keep it going. The fun stuff is just getting started. 

I'm also curious to see how the shivaharan track is handled, even though the focus seems to be consciously on Bharat. You have been dropping hints about Shiva and haran from geetha's own pre-marital days being the same person, so if amd when you do decide to explore that facet it should be very entertaining.

The inability of Gautham to father children is also going to be an emotional blow for the couple, when he discloses it. 

Such a wonderful and intelligent plot, with the characters becoming better defined as the story progresses. Unique for Indian story sites. Kudos to you, and hope you keep going. 












Thank you very much all of you.

Update this weekend.