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Fantasy Meri bholi maaa aur hamra chalak padosi
Bhai aap naa Yaar ek bohot he erotic kahani likh rahe ho and yesa. Bohot kaam hota hai kee readers desperately wait kaare kisi kahani ke liye.... Muze bus ek hee shikayat hai ....aap na story kaa time set kardo like daily ya one day gap use kya hoga kee baat baar ye site open nahee karna padega and basically muze mera personal perspective hai story building important hai kyunki sex scene to important hai but without solid foundation and introduction usane maza nahee aata hai.....aap one of the best writter ho .....
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RE: Meri bholi maaa aur hamra chalak padosi - by mahesharpita1987 - 04-12-2025, 07:19 PM



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