Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

Agreed, Shailu here is definitely a unique writer in this forum who thrive on minute details that no one can explain with such finesse. She can explain emotions, situations and surrounding with such details that you can be in the room and watch it live. We are used to stories where lead role is introduced in page 1 and by page 3 we can already see her sleep with half of men from the story so this take on storytelling is definitely refreshing and new to this forum. Only suggestion I want give is to work on the story and plot around the intimate descriptions so the overall plot is very impactful.

~RCF

Hi RCF

Thank you so much for such an insightful and encouraging message. I really appreciate the time you’ve taken to not only read the story but to offer such thoughtful feedback. The compliments you’ve given about the level of detail in my writing, being able to “explain emotions, situations, and surroundings” in such a way that the reader feels like they’re in the room, mean more than I can express.
 
When I write, I always aim to create an immersive experience. To me, it’s never just about what the characters do, but about how they feel, see, hear, and experience the world around them. I try to make the scenes vibrant, and I’m thrilled to know that it’s coming through in a way that allows you to experience it as though you were right there with them. To know that you felt that is incredibly rewarding.
 
I completely understand what you mean about the quick-paced nature of many stories, where the character is introduced and then quickly becomes entangled with every male lead in the plot. While that kind of writing definitely has its appeal for many people, I’ve always wanted to take a different approach. For me, the journey is just as important, if not more so, than the destination. I’m glad that this slower, more emotionally-charged approach is resonating with you, and I hope it continues to bring a fresh dynamic to the stories in this forum.
 
Your suggestion to work on the plot and story around the intimate scenes is something I take to heart. It’s true that intimacy and passion are vital aspects of the story, I’ll make sure to keep focusing on those areas, ensuring that every intimate moment feels earned and justified by the narrative.
 
I also want to take a moment to thank you sincerely for the consistent ratings you’ve been giving after each update. Your ratings mean more to me than you might realize. Not only do they serve as a kind of affirmation that the work is connecting with you, but they also inspire me to keep pushing myself as a writer. Every time I see your thoughtful feedback and ratings, it motivates me to keep improving and elevating the storytelling. Knowing that my work is resonating with you, that you are actively engaged in the story, gives me a deep sense of purpose. So, thank you once again for that, as it truly helps drive me forward.
 
Once again, thank you for your kind words, and for the thoughtful suggestion. It’s readers like you who motivate me to keep improving and striving for more. I can’t wait to continue the journey with Priya, Ravi, and Amit, and I hope the next chapters will further reflect this balance of plot and passion you’ve recommended.
 
Looking forward to hearing more of your thoughts,
 
With appreciation, creativity, and the warmth your words have given me,

-- Shailu