Yesterday, 12:33 AM
Agreed, Shailu here is definitely a unique writer in this forum who thrive on minute details that no one can explain with such finesse. She can explain emotions, situations and surrounding with such details that you can be in the room and watch it live. We are used to stories where lead role is introduced in page 1 and by page 3 we can already see her sleep with half of men from the story so this take on storytelling is definitely refreshing and new to this forum. Only suggestion I want give is to work on the story and plot around the intimate descriptions so the overall plot is very impactful.
~RCF
~RCF


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