Adultery FALL OF THE ARROGANT MOTHER

[PELURI]

the story began well....somehow, veered off to become crude and distasteful...may be the target audience are some wild teenagers....the pics too are garish n wild ...nothing to get aroused....to complement the impressive writting skills of the author, new characters may be introduced with close to real life situations, to make the story appeal to larger audiences....otherwise can end here....