[Umavictor32]

The colour photo showing Shipra humping on Patode's cock is too hot. Superb work with the photos.

The narration is good, but Suraj, please do something about the quantity of talking from Patode while having sex. It is not only unnatural that anyone talks that much but it is actually having an off-putting effect on Shipra, unless you deliberately intend that for her. While reading though, it is annoying.

And try not to make us wait too long for the next part.

 What makes this story different from other stories is patode speech my dear....patode is not just doing sex with shipra....he is corrupting her...he is making her submissive...he is breaking her...he is destroying her thought process step by step ......secondly this is not visual media....while writting to express how a woman is verbally corrupted we need to follow this style..... I would expect more of patode talks which I feel is a highlight in this story...