[Umavictor32]

Hi Suraj sir, the update is great, but I didn’t like the direction it took. You initially showed Shipra in a high position, but now she’s portrayed as a whore. The stranger might be Salim, I think, but I’m not convinced by how you changed Shipra. How could a highly educated and ambitious woman fall for such desires? I know it’s just fantasy, but like other stories in the forum, turning a woman into a whore means you don’t need to show her in a high position like in the beginning. Your story stood out as the best in the forum because of the cat-and-mouse dynamic between Shipra and Patode, but now she’s fully submissive to him, and I really don’t like this turn.

If she shares herself with others in her moments of euphoria, it feels like something familiar, but I don’t think there’s any new element or surprise in your story, apart from her fully embracing that role. When will she come to her senses?

I completely disagree to this... Firstly understand the amount of time taken by Suraj to make  shipra to this level....secondly if you focus on namrata's response and shipra response you can find that shipra still tries to keep up her reputation by bouncing back or speak ruthless to patode...only in this update, she is being bit submissive but compared to Namrata her attitude still has that swag... One more thing which we have to understand is her situation...she is not having a supportive husband,no sex,no love nothing...so when you have a person opposite to her who keep on bringing out her tragedy in life and tell her that he can be better person, automatically shipra will get inclined to patode....so I don't think so shipra behaving like this in this update...and I think till she gets inclined to toppo this will continue....