Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[RCF]

Hi Suraj sir, the update is great, but I didn’t like the direction it took. You initially showed Shipra in a high position, but now she’s portrayed as a whore. The stranger might be Salim, I think, but I’m not convinced by how you changed Shipra. How could a highly educated and ambitious woman fall for such desires? I know it’s just fantasy, but like other stories in the forum, turning a woman into a whore means you don’t need to show her in a high position like in the beginning. Your story stood out as the best in the forum because of the cat-and-mouse dynamic between Shipra and Patode, but now she’s fully submissive to him, and I really don’t like this turn.

If she shares herself with others in her moments of euphoria, it feels like something familiar, but I don’t think there’s any new element or surprise in your story, apart from her fully embracing that role. When will she come to her senses?

Agreed, though this is expected as part of the story. Despite slow seduction, Patode grooming her which took almost 20 chapters, we should be convinced now that she changed for good. She craves wild sex now and its evident. I still think when this is over she will be mad at Patode for taking her to a park and sharing her with Salim thinking this is coincidence and not planned. Eventually Salim would also get her in his own time with out Patode so this is a familiar arc that will continue until Patode holds upper hand. 

I guess only when Toppo gets her then she will truly realizes her downfall as she hates Toppo and will never willingly give herself to him unless coerced by Patode so that I think would be turning point. 

~RCF