Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[damien123456]

Hi Suraj sir, the update is great, but I didn’t like the direction it took. You initially showed Shipra in a high position, but now she’s portrayed as a whore. The stranger might be Salim, I think, but I’m not convinced by how you changed Shipra. How could a highly educated and ambitious woman fall for such desires? I know it’s just fantasy, but like other stories in the forum, turning a woman into a whore means you don’t need to show her in a high position like in the beginning. Your story stood out as the best in the forum because of the cat-and-mouse dynamic between Shipra and Patode, but now she’s fully submissive to him, and I really don’t like this turn.

If she shares herself with others in her moments of euphoria, it feels like something familiar, but I don’t think there’s any new element or surprise in your story, apart from her fully embracing that role. When will she come to her senses?