29-11-2025, 05:51 PM
(28-11-2025, 11:04 AM)star n star Wrote: Dear Readers,
I have quiet a long ideas for this story.Along with that if you have any suggestion and like to add some spice in the story . I will figure out a way to add that in the story. Your suggestion will help me to understand your way that you like. comment your ideas and desires.Thank you![]()
I've always let the writer take the story where he/she wants to because its their own creative work.
Frankly I can find no fault in the way you have developed it so far. Please continue in the same vein as you are writing right now and don't let anyone say its bad writing
This has the making of a good long story masterpiece in erotica.



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