Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

Dear Shailu,
I rarely wander into the English Stories section, but a couple of days ago your story caught my eye. As a writer myself, curiosity made me click—yet I had no idea that one small click would cost me two days of leave, all my tasks, and every bit of focus I had left.
You are a terrible influence.
I’m sending you the invoice soon—be ready to pay when you receive it.
When I reached page 79, I found myself thinking about how deceptively simple your plot is. A visitor who steps into someone’s home, becomes emotionally entangled with the people there, crosses boundaries of connection and desire… It can be summed up in one or two lines. And yet, you turned those two lines into a story that pulls the reader in line by line, makes them feel, sink into it, live inside it.
Anyone can write a story when they have a plot. But only you can take a simple plot and make it a world—felt, lived, and breathed.
Your grip on language, the flow of your words, your emotional depth—
it’s like the first rain falling on long-dry fields, releasing a fragrance that cannot be forgotten.
Reading you reminded me of emotions I once knew deeply when I was young—before age, duties, and responsibilities slowly turned feelings into actions, and actions into routine. You brought those old emotions back, alive and trembling.
Thank you for writing.
Thank you for experimenting.
Thank you for giving your time to this craft, and for sharing it with us.
Writers like you are rare—diamonds more precious than a Kohinoor—
and we must preserve that brilliance.
Keep writing, Shailu.
Keep mesmerizing your readers.
You have earned one more devoted fan.
And now because of you, I’m visiting the English Stories page every single day.
Remember—you owe me for this.
With admiration,

Dear Siva Reddy Sir

Oh My God. It is really The Siva Reddy Sir, the famous erotic writer I ever known. OMG, I never even dreamt of communicating with you. It feels like more than a dream come true. I just woke up and opened my phone to check for any feedback on my stories, and I found your message. I’m still in shock. I went to your profile to confirm that it really was you who messaged me. I honestly couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw your appreciation for my work.
 
To receive such praise from The Greatest Siva Reddy Sir, the master of Erotic Story Writing, is the highest honor for me as someone just learning how to write.
 
It takes me back to the late 2021, way before my marriage, during the second wave of COVID. I was in my bedroom, wrapped in a comforter, reading your story “Kalasi Vachina Adhrustam”. At that time, I wasn’t even registered on this site, and though I am from a Telugu state, my Telugu reading skills aren’t good. But I pushed through because your story captivated me so deeply. It took me months to read just about 25 pages, but that story was the only thing I read in Telugu at the time. Your writing, Sir, was the reason I kept going. It felt so natural, so beautifully crafted, and I couldn’t get enough of it.
 
And now, receiving your feedback feels like receiving the greatest reward, one that I will cherish for the rest of my life. If I could pin this message as the front page for all my stories, I would.
 
Your feedback left me absolutely speechless. To know that someone I admire so much, someone whose work I’ve spent hours, weeks and months reading and studying, took the time to not only read my story but also offer such kind and detailed feedback is beyond anything I ever expected. Honestly, receiving your words is like a gift I will treasure forever.
 
I’m flattered by your kind comparison to the first rain, and I can only say thank you from the bottom of my heart for such an insightful and poetic review. When you said that my story turned a simple plot into something felt, lived, and breathed, I couldn’t have asked for a more perfect compliment. It’s the goal of every writer to strive for with every word they write, and to hear that I was able to achieve that, moreover, that message coming from you means the world to me. Your ability to articulate the emotions that stories evoke, your insight into the craft, has always been something I’ve deeply admired, and to now have you appreciate my own writing feels unreal.
 
And as for the “invoice”, I’ll gladly pay it, though I suspect that’s the cost of having my admirer to admire me. I promise I’ll keep writing, and I hope to continue to earn your admiration and maybe some day a like from you (I have seen your profile, you have given only one like so far.  That shows how valuable it is to get a like from you). You’ve truly made my day with your message, and I’m honored to have you read my story.
 
Thank you for reminding me why I write and for encouraging me to continue this journey. Your message is an inspiration, and it fills me with the determination to keep growing as a writer. I’ll do my best to live up to your words and continue sharing stories that resonate, just as yours have for me.
 
You have no idea how much it means to me to hear this from you. I am beyond grateful and honored. I promise I will keep writing, keep experimenting, and keep striving to bring something meaningful to the world of storytelling.
 
Thank you, once again, for your generosity, your encouragement, and your priceless feedback. You’ve earned my undying respect as both a writer and as a reader.
 
I realize I’m getting a bit too excited and turning this into a long reply… I won’t be surprised if you send me another invoice just for reading it. ;)
 
With the deepest gratitude and admiration.

-- Shailu