27-11-2025, 02:02 PM
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Chapter 27 - WTF . What happened ? Felt little Rushed though it contained some good moments and scenario but still fall short .
7/10 .
Missed opportunity ? I have been waiting for this moment , Hemant x Meghna getting their shot and Then Sona x Hemant confrontation and it was perfect situation to show SONA' jealousy and insecurity , Hemant should have teased her more and then
Finally STAND OFF BETWEEN SONA x MEGHNA . SONA should have understand her plan or misinterpret MEGHNA's intention such as Pushing VIKRAM on her and Taking HEMANT or simply more drama was needed there . Both of these incident deserved at least a paragraph to create a dynamic and more tension among the characters .
POOR RITESH , His death was brutal . Highlight of the Story . Also we get to know how brutal and dangerous ZARIR is . His and MICHAEL KING BATTLE will be fun to watch .
The story suddenly moves so fast . ZARIR moving India .
ANJANA . Her plan was despicable but so simple and efficient . SONA will fall in her trap . She is so stupid . Even after every thing has happened one thing she failed to do is MOVE AWAY FROM VIKRAM .
I dont how hard it is for her to just simply AVOID him . Confessing that she does not feels like same for him and that she never loved him but still linger around him and telling him move on etc etc is what giving VIKRAM the false hope .
I think VIKRKAM still has a chance with her at this point this is getting so repetitive . Her actions remains the same . Even after so many things happened She just could not get away from him . Is it that hard for her to just completely Ghost him .It is not that she could not , She just dont want to .
And now , She is surrounded by ENEMIES - ANAJANA, SCORNEFUL MEGHNA , and VIKRAM . There is no way she could fight them . Hemant of course , Her guardian angle will save her but He could not help her with her feelings . He can help her physically but mentally and psychologically she is not that tough , THE TRIO will manipulate her , trap her , Capture her , and Imprison her with VIKRAM as her JAILER . She is just too stupid at this point now . I guess Sona needs to give reality check to VIKRAM or Behave in a way that shows she despised him or rudely shut him off or anything that made him feels like he is just like another stranger for her until I dont see any way for her to survive on her own . Her friendly nature towards VIKRAM is the problem . Now He is moving to GOA too . Her whole plan fall flat before even starting . Does She not thinks How Hemant would react when comes to know that both of them moving to GOA . Hemant already accepted that which make him weak , he will lose focus thus create a window of opportunity for his enemies to attack .
HEMANT is getting distracted , now SANJANA is after him . But at least he got VIKRAM's file and BAJAJ CORP's name under his RADAR . I hope Harry has planned at least one confrontation between VIKRAM and MICHAEL KING . He needs to get know Who is the MAN he messed up .
HEMANT at this point is very vulnerable , Even though He knew that this day will come , But GOA's plan of VIKRAM and SONA will shook him and Then Sona moving to delhi , Then with ANJANA's family , THEN VIKRAM is also gonna be there , It will hurt him . Let us see How he handle himself , More women to ease his pain , PRANITHA , Specially TARA . She got perfect opportunity and she will exploit this.
Both Husband and Wife , VULNERABLE and SURROUNDED by ENEMIES . They dont have anyone but each other even though they are separated. Let see How they fight and survive .
THE SEPARATION was emotional . And THAT AIRPORT scene was so surreal and bittersweet . A moment of SOLACE for both of them . After a long time we get to see both of them together so it was needed and expected and executed well for that PRAISE FOR YOU HARRY
. The longing they felt for each other , emotionally and Physically was well evident . I hope this fuels their passion for each other again and ignite the old flame , the fire again . From the ASHES of Betrayal , Pain , and heart break , Their love rises like Phoenix and protects them in UPCOMING WAR on both of them and Guides them towards each other .
Few lines , Yet they carry so much weight . Lovely Ending with Hope and Warmth .
Again , Wonderful Update , Harry .
.
and I Hope you are fine and well .
7/10 .
Missed opportunity ? I have been waiting for this moment , Hemant x Meghna getting their shot and Then Sona x Hemant confrontation and it was perfect situation to show SONA' jealousy and insecurity , Hemant should have teased her more and then
Finally STAND OFF BETWEEN SONA x MEGHNA . SONA should have understand her plan or misinterpret MEGHNA's intention such as Pushing VIKRAM on her and Taking HEMANT or simply more drama was needed there . Both of these incident deserved at least a paragraph to create a dynamic and more tension among the characters .
POOR RITESH , His death was brutal . Highlight of the Story . Also we get to know how brutal and dangerous ZARIR is . His and MICHAEL KING BATTLE will be fun to watch .
The story suddenly moves so fast . ZARIR moving India .
ANJANA . Her plan was despicable but so simple and efficient . SONA will fall in her trap . She is so stupid . Even after every thing has happened one thing she failed to do is MOVE AWAY FROM VIKRAM .
I dont how hard it is for her to just simply AVOID him . Confessing that she does not feels like same for him and that she never loved him but still linger around him and telling him move on etc etc is what giving VIKRAM the false hope .
I think VIKRKAM still has a chance with her at this point this is getting so repetitive . Her actions remains the same . Even after so many things happened She just could not get away from him . Is it that hard for her to just completely Ghost him .It is not that she could not , She just dont want to .
And now , She is surrounded by ENEMIES - ANAJANA, SCORNEFUL MEGHNA , and VIKRAM . There is no way she could fight them . Hemant of course , Her guardian angle will save her but He could not help her with her feelings . He can help her physically but mentally and psychologically she is not that tough , THE TRIO will manipulate her , trap her , Capture her , and Imprison her with VIKRAM as her JAILER . She is just too stupid at this point now . I guess Sona needs to give reality check to VIKRAM or Behave in a way that shows she despised him or rudely shut him off or anything that made him feels like he is just like another stranger for her until I dont see any way for her to survive on her own . Her friendly nature towards VIKRAM is the problem . Now He is moving to GOA too . Her whole plan fall flat before even starting . Does She not thinks How Hemant would react when comes to know that both of them moving to GOA . Hemant already accepted that which make him weak , he will lose focus thus create a window of opportunity for his enemies to attack .
HEMANT is getting distracted , now SANJANA is after him . But at least he got VIKRAM's file and BAJAJ CORP's name under his RADAR . I hope Harry has planned at least one confrontation between VIKRAM and MICHAEL KING . He needs to get know Who is the MAN he messed up .
HEMANT at this point is very vulnerable , Even though He knew that this day will come , But GOA's plan of VIKRAM and SONA will shook him and Then Sona moving to delhi , Then with ANJANA's family , THEN VIKRAM is also gonna be there , It will hurt him . Let us see How he handle himself , More women to ease his pain , PRANITHA , Specially TARA . She got perfect opportunity and she will exploit this.
Both Husband and Wife , VULNERABLE and SURROUNDED by ENEMIES . They dont have anyone but each other even though they are separated. Let see How they fight and survive .
THE SEPARATION was emotional . And THAT AIRPORT scene was so surreal and bittersweet . A moment of SOLACE for both of them . After a long time we get to see both of them together so it was needed and expected and executed well for that PRAISE FOR YOU HARRY
. The longing they felt for each other , emotionally and Physically was well evident . I hope this fuels their passion for each other again and ignite the old flame , the fire again . From the ASHES of Betrayal , Pain , and heart break , Their love rises like Phoenix and protects them in UPCOMING WAR on both of them and Guides them towards each other . Quote:'I am yours. I have always been yours'
"Whatever happens, Hemant… I will always love you. This is not an ending. It’s just… a path we have to walk so we can find our way back to each other"
"You are mine. I am yours. And we will learn that truth from our life forward!"
Few lines , Yet they carry so much weight . Lovely Ending with Hope and Warmth .
Again , Wonderful Update , Harry .
. and I Hope you are fine and well .
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