26-11-2025, 08:10 AM
Yes, I dont want anyone to get upset over feedback. I am happy to listen to it myself.
Yes, the story moved away from Adultery, but maybe it will get back to it. I intend to connect it to some other stories which I can write within this story or as separate stories. I probably would have got to that point if it wasnt for my personal circumstances.
There is a duality to humans, they can be two different things to two different set of people. So I respectfully disagree with some of your points on Iqbal. Also Supriya was sexually naive, and therefore somethings that happened.
If I could rewrite it all over again, I would probably write it slightly differently and cut out a few things but probably still want to end up here at this point.
As some or many of you may know its really hard to find time to write a story. I feel I have given most of my available time over the last year writing this. At times, I felt I didnt want to go on, but then decided to continue. Having invested so much of my personal time now, I feel like if I rush things than it would not give a satisfactory result. Thank you for reading the story.
Yes, the story moved away from Adultery, but maybe it will get back to it. I intend to connect it to some other stories which I can write within this story or as separate stories. I probably would have got to that point if it wasnt for my personal circumstances.
There is a duality to humans, they can be two different things to two different set of people. So I respectfully disagree with some of your points on Iqbal. Also Supriya was sexually naive, and therefore somethings that happened.
If I could rewrite it all over again, I would probably write it slightly differently and cut out a few things but probably still want to end up here at this point.
As some or many of you may know its really hard to find time to write a story. I feel I have given most of my available time over the last year writing this. At times, I felt I didnt want to go on, but then decided to continue. Having invested so much of my personal time now, I feel like if I rush things than it would not give a satisfactory result. Thank you for reading the story.


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