[shdas]

In all honesty , from your perspective that may not be intentional but that is how the story turned out to be...from her devar , to husband , to friend , to client , to manager - are bad but the eternal bliss with one character who at one point was longing for her , fcking her maid in her house , actually put his dick in her attacker ( lol ) ...and now has "aap kisi aur ki amanat hain " on... am I saying were you intentional ..NO...am i saying that how story is right now Yes ...
Leave hndu / mus angle here ....story itself seems to be more romance now than adultery ...
Also i am not even comfortable writing this as i know some ( read 2) followers or readers of yours will come and start pushing back on any opinion - one reader said something that this village thing does not look correct ..was told to read the story again.. your previous version of story also changed drastically ...why this thread is so defensive about any perspective and why there are ppl to defend ... dont get me wrong but write your story way you wanted ...and let this thread be yours..
PS : I am not the one who complained ..but saw a pattern here and in all honesty calling out ... giving my perspective if there is appetite to take one