25-11-2025, 09:32 AM
(25-11-2025, 02:23 AM)Sriya2 Wrote: Yes, it would not have worked for me if they had sex straight away as they still have a lot of awkward nervous energy between the two of them. They needed that conversation. It’s not a KLPD in my view, they are bonding and closer than before. Now they have confessed its easier for me to write as well.
I cant tell you how many times I wrote something and deleted it. It was hard to get over this piece.
Yes, all that is correct and probably me calling it KLPD is a bit overboard as I went with my immediate feelings at that point in time. But I anticipate that the deep hurt felt by Iqbal over his ex-wife/lover must mean a flashback/backstory, and without assuaging this hurt, it may not be possible for him to move on happily with Supriya. Am I correct in assuming this? And if yes, it just feels to me like the grand fuck will get delayed.
Oh,yes, I do acknowledge how hard writing all this must have been for you and fully appreciate it. You continue to delight us. I just felt like giving my constructive feedback and I kmow you will take it in your stride positively.


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