Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

[Dmahi19]

Bhai in your ,story cum saga, nobody can match Champa complete desire of sex except Manu but when she spend some time with others she always have it feelng of empitness after her adventures ... But she always make up according to herself how to please herself ...that's why I like her character most

But when come to Manu ... Don't know he is always strong and loveable but u always present him in loss as he is the person who always we feel in loss and as sex manic ...

But up to now he respects all women and girls in his contact and love them all ...but after that also he only suffered why??

For Manu I say one thing he deserves better role and strong character in ur story not equal to Champa but next to her .... In ur story all female characters r very strong and dominant as we read n observe but not even single male character come to the rank ???

Bring Manu as strong character and let him free ... Because he only bring x factor and erotism in ur epic

But 1 thing I say ur r writer n only know how to hold story , keep ur work with full pride ... Thanks