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Thriller BEHEN_CODE
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Episode 8

SAB KUCH PERFECT THA,BAS WAQT GALAT THA


Scene: Arti’s Kitchen – Behen_Code Group Chat ?

(Background: soft morning chaos — cooker ki seeti, chai ki khushboo, aur Arti ke mischievous expressions)

? Rahat:
“Good morning hottie librarian ??”

? Ishani:
“Arti di, kal tumhare naam pe full gossip party thi. Ab toh confession dena padega ?”

? Anushka:
“Haan madam, itni sanskari ho fir bhi husband ke saath romance ki khabar har corner me hai ?”

? Anisha:
“Main toh bas soch rahi thi — Mrs. Arti & Mr. Abhishek ka podcast bana du, title: Gyaan Ganga ke gupshup! ?”

(Arti screen dekhke ek smirk karti hai, haath me belan pakda hai, aur phone pe reply type karti hai…)

? Arti:

> “Subah subah mujhe tease karne ka itna mann kyun karta hai tum sabko? Rahat, kal raat ka radio show tera tha ya adult counselling session?”



(Next reply, wink emoji ke sath)

? Arti:

> “Aur Ishani, madam model ho ke bhi dusron ki romance pe focus karti ho... khud ka toh abhi tak crush se ‘hi’ bhi nahi bola ?”



(Arti has kar apni chai sip karti hai, typing continues…)

? Arti:

> “Anushka ji, office me manager line marte hain aur ghar aake mujhe line sunaati ho… wah bhai wah, multitasking queen ?”



? Arti:

> “Aur Anisha… tu toh abhi bachi hai re! Gyaan Ganga ke podcast me teri entry allowed nahi ? pehle assignment complete kar le, fir ‘romance notes’ likhna!”



(Arti phone side me rakhti hai, smile karte hue kitchen counter pe jhuki hai, fir last line likhti hai…)

? Arti (last message):

> “Chalo ab sab apna kaam karo… warna aaj ka topic banaungi Behen_Code ke naughty confession day! ??”



(Uske baad sab group me emojis flood karte hain — ?????)

Background:
Pressure cooker ki seeti band hoti hai, aur Arti khud se bolti hai —
“Yeh ladkiyaan na… ek din mujhe pagal karengi.”

Camera zoom out hota hai, screen pe likha aata hai:
“BEHEN_CODE - Morning banter ends… but madness continues.”

Scene Morning Entry – Bank of Radiance


(Background: soft morning light filters through glass doors. Ek modern private bank ka interior — blue-white theme, subtle aroma of coffee, staff busy at counters. Camera floor se upar move karta hai...)

? Background Music: slow instrumental tune — soft piano with faint beats.

Footsteps echo — tak tak tak —
Silver heels, beige trousers, white silk shirt, hair neatly tied in a low ponytail.

Camera tilt hota hai —
Anushka enters the frame.
Ek calm confidence uske chehre pe. Na zyada smile, na koi ghamand — bas ek controlled grace.

Security guard respectfully greet karta hai —
“Good morning, ma’am!”

Anushka: (light smile)
“Good morning, Ramesh. System check kar lena — kal server hang hua tha.”

(Uski awaaz soft hai, lekin authority clear hai. Har staff usse dekh ke sidha ho jaata hai — ye wahi Anushka hai jiska naam branch me ‘reliable officer’ ke roop me mashhoor hai.)


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Scene Conference Room – The Client Meeting

(Camera shift: ek bright glass cabin jahan ek table pe meeting set ho rahi hai.)

Manager (Mr. Sinha) tension me walk kar raha hai —
“Yaar yeh client bahut tough hai, kal bhi reject kar gaya tha proposal.”

Ek junior officer — nervously:
“Ma’am handle karengi na?”

(Door khulta hai — Anushka file le kar aati hai.)

Anushka: (calmly)
“Client tough ho ya easy, numbers kabhi jhoot nahi bolte.”
She places her laptop on the table.
“Bas data sahi frame me present hona chahiye.”

(Camera zoom-in — wo slide open karti hai, ek perfect presentation screen par reflect hota hai. Charts simple aur clean, har line me clarity.)

Client (impressed tone me):
“Ms. Anushka… you’ve explained this better than anyone from your branch before. I like your clarity.”

Anushka: (soft smile)
“Thank you, sir. Bank ka motto simple hai — Trust built with transparency.”

(Meeting khatam hoti hai — client handshake karta hai, approval de deta hai. Branch me ek halki si talian bajti hai. Mr. Sinha ka chehra relax ho jaata hai.)


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Scene The Applause Moment

(Camera track kare — Anushka walk kar rahi hai branch floor pe. Sab employees khush hain.)

Junior Staff (excited):
“Ma’am, client ne contract approve kar diya! Aapne toh kamaal kar diya.”

Anushka (smiling):
“Team effort tha. Sabne support kiya, warna single presentation se kuch nahi hota.”

(Uska tone humble hai, lekin aankhon me wo sharp confidence hai jo leadership define karta hai.)

Manager Sinha:
“Anushka, tum sirf apna kaam nahi karti, tum branch ka mood change kar deti ho.”

(Camera close-up on her smile — ek pal ke liye wo khidki ke bahar dekhti hai — halka sa breeze face par lagta hai. Uske aankhon me ek faint sadness ka reflection — jaise koi purani yaad.)

? Soft flashback cue starts – ek male voice faintly echoes:
"Tumhe office me sab admire karte hain... but tum ab bhi mujhse kyun door ho, Anu?"

(Flashback cut — Anushka aankhein band karti hai, fir smile forcefully wapas laati hai.)

Anushka (apne aap se):
“Some things... better left behind.”


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Scene Lunch Break – Cafeteria

(Anushka corner table pe baithi hai, coffee aur sandwich ke sath laptop open. Colleague Pooja aati hai.)

Pooja:
“Madam star ban gayi ho. Pure branch me tumhare naam ki baatein ho rahi hain.”

Anushka (light laugh):
“Bas aaj presentation sahi lag gayi. Waise bhi, kal fir new challenge ready hoga.”

Pooja:
“Tere jese logon ke liye challenge bhi confident lagta hai.”

(Anushka sip leti hai coffee ka. Ek second ke liye camera uske face pe rukta hai — smile ke peeche ek thodi thakan, ek emotional restraint.)


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Scene Evening – Branch Exit

(Bank close hone ka time. Sunlight glass pe golden shade me chamak rahi hai. Staff bye bol rahe hain.)

Security Guard:
“Good evening, ma’am.”

Anushka:
“Good evening, Ramesh. Kal 9 sharp, meeting file ready rakhna.”

(Wo apna bag shoulder pe daalti hai, ek baar peeche mud kar dekhti hai — poora branch light me khil raha hai, jaise uske andar ke discipline aur perfection ka reflection.)

? Background Music (slow violin):
“She walks alone, but she walks strong.”

(Camera slow zoom-out — Anushka gate se bahar nikalti hai, streets ki halchal me ghul jaati hai. Uska silhouette evening light me dikhai deta hai — ek self-made woman, jise duniya sirf success me dekhti hai, dard me nahi.)

Scene Ghar Ki Shaam – Maa Beti Ki Dunia


(Background: warm yellow light, chhoti si 2BHK flat, walls pe old family photos, ek shelf pe Anushka ke father ka framed photo — uniform me muskuraate hue. Kitchen se khushbu aa rahi hai — tadka lagne ki, jeera aur lehsun ki.)

? Background music: “Khushbuon ke jaise…” (soft instrumental, emotional tone)

(Camera entry — door khulta hai. Anushka ghar aati hai, thodi tired magar relaxed smile ke sath.)

Anushka:
“Maa… main aa gayi!”

Uski maa (Rukmini) kitchen se cheekhti hai:
“Arey madam, itni der kar di! Socha tha bank band ho gaya kya aaj?”

Anushka (muskurate hue bag sofa pe daalti hai):
“Client meeting thi maa… thoda late ho gaya. Par kaam accha gaya aaj.”

Rukmini (proud smile):
“Mujhe pata tha meri beti sabse best karegi. Ab bank wale bhi samjhenge ki yeh job tumhe milna likha tha.”

(Anushka shoes utar ke direct kitchen me chali jaati hai — sleeves fold karte hue.)

Anushka:
“Chalo batao, aaj kya bana rahe ho?”

Rukmini:
“Bhindi aur daal chawal. Simple ghar ka khana. Tum toh office wale fancy khana khake aa jaati ho…”

Anushka:
“Maa, mujhe toh yeh ghar ka khana hi fancy lagta hai. Office ka food plastic jaisa lagta hai.”

(Dono has padti hain. Anushka kadhai me bhindi hilane lagti hai — oil ke chhente padte hain.)

Rukmini (thoda haas ke):
“Arre sambhal ke! Abhi face pe daag pad gaya toh kal bank me sab clients tere charm ke fan kaise rahenge?”

Anushka:
“Unhe charm nahi, performance pasand hai.”
(phir aankh maar ke)
“Waise bhi beauty toh maa se mili hai mujhe.”

Rukmini (thoda blush karte hue):
“Bas bas, buttering band kar. Aaj kal ki ladkiyaan zubaan me mirch-masala le aati hain.”

(Dono ke beech ek pure, natural laughter. Background me cooker ka whistle bajta hai. Anushka haath dhote hue fridge se paani nikalti hai, dono table set karne lagti hain.)


---

Scene Dinner Time – Small Talks, Big Love

(Table pe simple sa khana, ek steel ki thali, aur side me chutney. Rukmini khana serve karti hai, Anushka apne phone me ek photo scroll kar rahi hai.)

Rukmini:
“Kya dekh rahi hai phone me?”

Anushka (light smile):
“Office me sabne photo li thi meeting ke baad. Sab keh rahe the, ‘Anushka ma’am to rockstar hai’.”

Rukmini:
“Tu toh hai hi meri rockstar. Tere papa dekhte toh…”
(thoda ruk jaati hai, aankhon me halka sa paani)
“…bahut khush hote.”

(Anushka ka chehra soft ho jaata hai. Thodi der silence. Phir smile laati hai.)

Anushka (halki awaaz me):
“Mujhe pata hai maa. Papa ke bina sab kuch alag hai… lekin unki seat par kaam karna… mujhe lagta hai jaise wo mere paas hain.”

(Camera close-up — dono ke aankh me halka moisture, phir Rukmini haath badha ke Anushka ke sir pe rakh deti hai.)

Rukmini:
“Bas yahi khayal rakha kar. Kamyabi me kabhi apna asli dil mat kho dena.”

Anushka:
“Main nahi khoongi, maa. Kyunki aap ho mere saath.”

(Thoda sa pause — dono smile karte hain. Phir ek fun moment.)

Rukmini:
“Waise tujhe na shaadi kar leni chahiye. Ab tujhe dekh kar lagta hai ghar me robot reh raha hai.”

Anushka (laugh ke):
“Robot? Main?”

Rukmini:
“Haan, subah office, shaam file, raat laptop. Thoda love-life bhi rakho beti.”

Anushka (teasing tone me):
“Arey maa, aapko bhi koi serial jaisa romance chahiye kya?”

Rukmini (smiling):
“Thoda toh chahiye! Mujhe bhi dekhna hai meri beti blush karti kaisi lagti hai.”

(Anushka thoda sharma kar spoon table pe rakhti hai.)

Anushka:
“Filhal toh blush karne ka time sirf client ke appreciation pe milta hai.”

Rukmini:
“Bas wahi blush kisi acche ladke ke liye bhi rakh lena.”

(Dono fir se hans padti hain. Camera slow zoom-out — dono khana khate hue ek doosre ki baatein sun rahi hain. TV pe background me news chal rahi hai, lekin unke liye duniya wahi chhoti si table hai.)

? Background Music: “Main ghar laut aayi…” (slow, emotional female hum)


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Scene Night Reflection

(Later that night — Anushka apne room me hai. Table par uske father ka photo, ek half-burnt candle, aur diary.)

(Wo diary kholti hai aur likhti hai —)

?️

“Papa, aaj presentation approve ho gaya. Sab ne tarif ki.
Par jaise har success ke baad ek khaali si feeling hoti hai… waise hi aaj bhi hai.
Maa khush hai, main bhi hoon…
Lekin kabhi-kabhi lagta hai, mujhe bhi kisi ki ‘Anushka’ banne ka mann karta hai.”

(Camera zoom-out, light dim hoti hai. Window ke bahar moonlight gir rahi hai uske chehre par.)

? Soft piano tune plays

> “She is strong, she is calm…
But every strength hides a whisper —
Of someone she once was.”

Scene – Anushka ka Room (Present + Flashback Blend)

Raat ka waqt hai.
Anushka apne kamre ki balcony me baithi hai — haath me ek cup adhi thandi coffee ka, samne chand ki halki roshni, aur hawa me wo udasi jisme purani yaadein bas hawa ke saath chhupi hoti hain.

Uska phone table par rakha hai. Wo halki si muskaan ke saath screen unlock karti hai, gallery kholti hai… aur ek purani tasveer par ungli ruk jaati hai —
ek selfie, baarish me bheegi hui, uske sath Raghav — uska ex, uski kahani ka wo hissa jise wo bhoolna chahti hai par bhool nahi paati.

Screen par tasveer chamakti hai… aur dheere-dheere camera zoom out karta hai…

Flashback starts —

Baarish ka din tha.
Bank ke bahar bheed, logo ke haath me umbrellas, road par pani ke chhapke...
Anushka apni umbrella sambhalti hui nikalti hai — tabhi ek bike uske samne rukti hai, brakes ke sath paani ka chhanta udta hai.

Raghav (hanskar): “Oho, madam manager! Lagta hai aaj fir se aapko lift dena padega.”
Anushka (bhauen uthakar): “Lift ya chance? Dono me farak samjho, Mr. Flirt!”

Raghav bas hans padta hai. Uski aankhon me wo confident si masti, jisse Anushka hamesha haar jaati thi.
Wo bike pe baith jaati hai, aur dono baarish me bheegte hue chalte hain.

Cut to – ek chai tapri.
Baarish ka paani roof ke sheet pe padta hai, ek rhythmic sound. Raghav do cup chai laata hai.

Raghav: “Tere bina coffee ka taste bhi adhoora lagta hai…”
Anushka: “To kal se coffee bhi main hi banaungi kya, Mr. Banker?”
Dono hansi me kho jaate hain.

Kuch der baad baarish tez ho jaati hai. Dono ek chhoti chhat ke neeche aa jaate hain.
Raghav apni rumal se Anushka ke baal se girta paani pochhta hai…
ek pal ke liye dono chup ho jaate hain. Sirf baarish ki awaaz. Sirf aankhon ki baatein.

Camera slow motion me unke chehre ke close-up dikhata hai — wo pal jisme dono ke beech sirf mohabbat thi, bina lafzon ke.

Phir ek voice-over me Raghav ki purani baat goonjti hai —

> “Tere saath har baarish me ek naya season milta hai, Anu.”



Flashback fade-out hota hai…

Camera wapas current me aata hai —
Anushka ke aankh me ek aansu girta hai.
Wo wahi balcony me baithi hai, cup ab thanda ho chuka hai.
Phone screen ab bhi us purani photo par rukha hai.

Wo dheere se bolti hai —
Anushka (self talk, halki smile ke sath):
“Sab kuch perfect tha… bas waqt galat tha, Raghav.”

Background me halki hawa chalti hai, curtains udte hain.
Music fade hota hai.
Scene black ho jaata hai.

Scene – Arti & Abhishek’s Bedroom (Night)


Bedroom me halki yellow light jal rahi hai.
Abhishek bed par half blanket me letkar mobile scroll kar raha hai — face pe ek tired smile.

Bathroom se paani ki halki awaaz aa rahi hai.
Mirror ke samne Arti, apne night suit me, towel se baal pochti hai aur phone haath me le kar “Google” kholti hai.

Screen par likha hai:

> “How to do dirty talk with husband?”



Arti ka chehra ek second ke liye laal padta hai.
Wo apni aankhon me khud hi hairani ke sath hasti hai.

Arti (khud se):
“Arti… tu bhi na… kahin ye Rahat ka asar to nahi?”
(Phone me scroll karte hue muskaan dabaati hai)
“Arre yeh to saare angrezi me likha hai… koi hindi me bhi batata kya?”

Tabhi bahar se Abhishek ki awaaz aati hai —
Abhishek: “Baby, so jao na, kal office hai… kya kar rahi ho itni der se?”

Arti (jaldi se phone band karte hue):
“Aa… haan haan bas… moisturizer laga rahi thi.”

Abhishek (hanskar): “Moisturizer ya motivation?”
Arti (door se cheekh kar): “Shut up Abhishek!”

Wo bathroom se nikalti hai, lekin phone chhupake towel ke neeche rakhti hai.
Bed ke paas aake chupke se phone fir se kholti hai aur article padhne lagti hai —

> “Start with compliments... move to playful tone...”



Abhishek uski taraf dekh kar kehta hai —
“Arti, tu phone me kya padhti rehti hai raat raat bhar?”

Arti (jaldi se): “Bas bhagwan ke bhajan.”

Abhishek: “Bhajan me emoji kyu hote hain?”

Arti thoda ghabra jaati hai, phone bandh karti hai, aur bed me aake let jaati hai.
Abhishek use apni taraf kheechta hai, aur kehta hai —
“Tu kuch alag lag rahi hai aaj… kuch chal raha hai dimaag me?”

Arti aankh band karke kehti hai —
“Bas thoda… Rahat ka pravachan sun liya tha.”

Abhishek (hanskar): “Acha… fir to aaj mujhe dhyaan lagana chahiye.”

Arti aankh kholke uski taraf dekhti hai aur bolti hai —
“Tu so ja… kal Monday hai.”

Abhishek: “Haan, par ab to lagta hai raat thodi interesting hone wali hai.”

Arti pillow se uske muh pe maar deti hai.
Dono ki hansi me scene slow motion me fade hota hai —
Camera zoom karta hai Arti ke phone screen par, jahan likha hota hai:

> “Top 5 Dirty Talk Examples – For Beginners”



Screen freeze hoti hai, aur peeche se Rahat ki voice-over aati hai (radio style me):

> “Zindagi me thoda naughty hona bhi zaroori hai, warna romance bhi discipline ban jaata hai.”
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