14-11-2025, 11:38 AM
(14-11-2025, 10:40 AM)amol1 Wrote: The story is really great but it's in slow pace ;)
Hi Amol1
Thank you so much for the feedback. I’m really glad to hear you enjoyed the story overall. I totally get what you mean about the pacing, it’s something I’m definitely thinking about as I continue to develop the plot.
I appreciate you pointing it out, and I’ll keep it in mind as I work on tightening things up in future chapters.
Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts. I appreciate your continued support.
With warm regards
-- Shailu


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