13-11-2025, 07:25 PM
(13-11-2025, 06:55 AM)PELURI Wrote: Bro Sham....your concepts are highly promising...the narration is lucid and gripping ...sexual tension, essential for good erotica too floats but the incidenta do not culminate to erotic experience....slow fire built up actually accentuates the experience....but experience should be there as well....my humble suggestion
Thanks for your feedback bro
Sure the experience will definitely be there....first few episodes is where the tension builds....thats why I'm going slow.....in later episodes you would know the reason....


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