Adultery Whispers in the Complex

[PELURI]

good begining Shalini ji...very well written first episode...appears you are a seasoned writer....however here's my two bit advise...plot has scope for lots of carnal activity...instigate the jealous divorced neighbour to make her lover trap/ seduce priya however,  the hallmark of good erotica is built up of sexual tension through delicate narration, fine language and final release through languid and soulful consummation....try to create a distinguished erotica....good luck