09-11-2025, 04:20 PM
All sexual or sex scenes somehow should have amit in it. With khushbu talking and justifying why she is doing it .
In this restaurant scene it would have been better if wife asks husband to stay and take pics and don't send him off to decorate bed. And for their actions wife let's husband know that she is doing this and takes his permission, humiliating him further.
Some suggestions. The writing is otherwise awesome.
In this restaurant scene it would have been better if wife asks husband to stay and take pics and don't send him off to decorate bed. And for their actions wife let's husband know that she is doing this and takes his permission, humiliating him further.
Some suggestions. The writing is otherwise awesome.


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