05-11-2025, 05:43 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-11-2025, 06:12 PM by anus24. Edited 5 times in total. Edited 5 times in total.)
My story so far has received 36 replies, out of which 27 were my own updates. Even among the remaining 9, most are my replies as well. I’ve seen many stories with far fewer updates but much higher reader engagement. I wanted to know if my story lacks grip. Is it not entertaining or engaging enough? On which front can I improve my storytelling?
One of the readers suggested that my frequent use of Telugu words (or whichever regional language the story is based in—Tamil, Marathi, Bengali, German, French, Japanese, etc.) might be affecting readability. However, I feel such linguistic flavor is central to my style of storytelling.
Some readers may find the protagonist slightly villainous, but his character will be better explored in later updates. I’ve also noticed that many stories here lack logic. For instance, in many harem stories, I find it unrealistic that any sane woman—let alone a beautiful or intelligent one—would willingly share her partner in the modern world, no matter how godly his character might be, unless manipulation is involved.
I try to build a story that follows some degree of logic, even if it’s based on fantastical elements that are generally taken for granted—like dark magic, for instance, which is treated as an accepted fact in this world i.e., in the story. Readers are welcome to point out any logical inconsistencies they notice, especially the bold or brazen ones. If i find that they are difficult to rectify i would leave it at that.
Regards.
One of the readers suggested that my frequent use of Telugu words (or whichever regional language the story is based in—Tamil, Marathi, Bengali, German, French, Japanese, etc.) might be affecting readability. However, I feel such linguistic flavor is central to my style of storytelling.
Some readers may find the protagonist slightly villainous, but his character will be better explored in later updates. I’ve also noticed that many stories here lack logic. For instance, in many harem stories, I find it unrealistic that any sane woman—let alone a beautiful or intelligent one—would willingly share her partner in the modern world, no matter how godly his character might be, unless manipulation is involved.
I try to build a story that follows some degree of logic, even if it’s based on fantastical elements that are generally taken for granted—like dark magic, for instance, which is treated as an accepted fact in this world i.e., in the story. Readers are welcome to point out any logical inconsistencies they notice, especially the bold or brazen ones. If i find that they are difficult to rectify i would leave it at that.
Regards.
![[+]](https://xossipy.com/themes/sharepoint/collapse_collapsed.png)