Yesterday, 02:00 PM 
		
	
	
		Hello readers,
I'm pausing updates on this story for the time being.
I originally wrote it in Hindi several years ago, and it became my most popular work.
I specially crafted the dailouges for hindi not english.
Recently, I set out to translate it into English using a tool, but feedback from some users highlighted that the translation felt a bit artificial, generated and lacked the natural flow of the original, which I crafted directly.
In trying to improve it, I reviewed every line carefully, and it became clear that my writing from back then showed some immaturity—particularly in the mother's dialogues, which makes her very immature woman.
I'll revisit and refine the entire piece in the future before sharing it again.
For now, my attention is on a new story I'm writing. I had considered using translation tools to handle everything quickly, but I've realized it deserves a more dedicated effort, so this will have to wait.
Thank you.
	
	
	
	
I'm pausing updates on this story for the time being.
I originally wrote it in Hindi several years ago, and it became my most popular work.
I specially crafted the dailouges for hindi not english.
Recently, I set out to translate it into English using a tool, but feedback from some users highlighted that the translation felt a bit artificial, generated and lacked the natural flow of the original, which I crafted directly.
In trying to improve it, I reviewed every line carefully, and it became clear that my writing from back then showed some immaturity—particularly in the mother's dialogues, which makes her very immature woman.
I'll revisit and refine the entire piece in the future before sharing it again.
For now, my attention is on a new story I'm writing. I had considered using translation tools to handle everything quickly, but I've realized it deserves a more dedicated effort, so this will have to wait.
Thank you.


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