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Thriller BEHEN_CODE
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Update 2  FLASHBACK memories



SCENE – ARTI KI HOME LIBRARY – DIWALI MEETING

(Background me halki sunlight, shelves ke beech thoda festive decoration — chhote diye aur ribbons.)

Arti
Chalo girls, sab beth jao. Library me bhi Diwali ka mood hai, hansi-mazaak ke saath.

Ishaani
Haan haan, aur yeh Arti ki “super serious library” bhi thodi fun ho jaye aaj!

Anisha
Hahaha! Serious library + Diwali = ultimate combo.

Anushka
Rahat abhi tak kahan hai? Radio me busy thi kya?

Rahat
(Aabhi entry leti hai, thodi late aur thodi thaki hui)
Haan yaar, sorry! Radio ka kaam thoda lamba ho gaya.

Ishaani
Arey waah! Late aayi toh humari “library queen” ka drama dekhne ka mauka mil gaya.

Rahat
Hahaha! Drama bolne ka haq tumhe sirf radio pe hai. Yahaan nahi.

Anisha
Arti, batao… tumhare secret snacks ka plan kya hai? Ya phir hum sirf hansi aur teasing hi enjoy karenge?

Arti
Secret snacks ka idea hai… par uske liye sabko patience chahiye.

Ishaani
Patience? Arti, tum bhi na… patience aur Diwali snacks dono ek saath kaise manage karogi?

Anushka
Hahaha! Bilkul, ye Arti hai, multitasking ka master.

Rahat
(Teasing)
Aur mummy style lectures bhi free me mil jate hain… library ka full package!

Arti
Hahaha! Rahat, lecture nahi, guidance bol lo. Aur tumhe bhi “special guest” banna hai, ready?

Rahat
Ready! Lekin warning hai — main tumhari saasu maa style teasing bhi return kar dungi.

Ishaani
Hahaha! Aur main sirf record kar rahi hoon, ye sab memories ke liye.

Anisha
Chalo phir, girls! Diwali vibes + hansi + secrets = perfect morning.

Sari girls laugh karte hue ek dusre ko chidhati hain, thoda playful teasing, kuch side jokes aur light-hearted banter. Scene me library ka calm aur cozy vibe maintain rehta hai.

Rahat
Arre girls, kal ke mission ke bare me batao… tum tino — Anisha, Ishaani, Anushka — kahan thi?

Anisha
Arey yaar, main… bas thodi busy thi ghar ke kaam me.

Ishaani
Haan, aur main… kuch urgent kaam aa gaya tha.

Anushka
Aur main… traffic me phase hui thi.

Rahat
(Half laughing, half teasing)
Sala, tum logo ka roj ka ho gaya hai yeh! Har mission me alag excuse!

Anisha
Hahaha! Arey Rahat, aisa mat bol…

Ishaani
Haan yaar, thoda chill karo…

Rahat
(Nok-jhok me teasing tone)
Chill? Excuses ka daily dose dena aur chill ka naam lena ek saath ho raha hai kya?

Anushka
Hahaha! Tum bhi na, bas khud ko perfect samajhti ho!

Arti
(Halki si serious, sab ko rokate hue)
Bas karo salo… lagta hai tum bhool gaye ki yeh group kis liye banaya gaya tha.
Yaad hai wo din…?

LASHBACK SCENE – BRIDGE INCIDENT (9 MONTHS PEHLE)


(Background: Arti aur Rahat ek hi scooty par ja rahi hain, haste-khelte baat kar rahi hain. Bridge par traffic aur hustle-bustle hai. Crowded bridge.)

Arti
Hahaha! Dekho traffic ka scene… lagta hai aaj bridge ka record todne wale hain!

Rahat
Haan yaar… aur ye log bhi kitne impatient hain!

(Arti aur Rahat khadi cars ke beech se smoothly scooty le ja rahi hain, aankhon me halki muskaan.)

Arti
Bas ek aur turn… aur phir straight home!

Rahat
(Thoda serious tone)
Arre wait… dekho wahan!

(Bridge ke edge par ek ladki khadi hai. Sab traffic me phanse hue log, hustle-bustle. Ladki visibly disturbed, ro rahi hai.)

(Rahat aur Arti sabse aage pahunchte hain, haath failate hue, ladki ko samjhane ki koshish karte hain.)

Ladki
(Aankhon me aansu, roti hui, gaaliya deti hui)
Har ladke par bharosa mat karna! Koi bhi… nahi!
Maine apni help mangi… kisi ne kuch nahi kiya! Kanoon ke rakhwale bhi… bas us ladke ke baap ke puppet the… ab main nahi jeena chahti! Sab sale harami maderchod hote hai... Yeh tumse nahi tumhare badan se pyaar karte hai...

(Arti aur Rahat dare hue, scooty se brake lagate hain aur aage badhte hain. Anushka, Ishaani aur Anisha bhi bridge par already wahan khadi hain, helpless aur shock me.)

Anushka
(whisper)
Huh… kya ho raha hai…?

Ishaani
Wo ladki… wo koodne wali hai…

Anisha
Nahi… aisa kaise ho sakta hai…?

Ladki
Us haramzade ne mujhe accept nahi kiya... Main use apna sab kuchh sonp chuki hu... Sab kuch...

Yeh bol kar wo ladki sharm or guilt se apna sir jhuka leti hai, or fir ek fire eyes ke sath sir utha kar dekhti hai...

Ladki
In sabko aaj maloom hoga ki koi bhi ladki khilona nahi hai, or na kabhi hogi... Meri aaj ki yeh qurbaani tum sab kutto ko yaad rahegi, is bhid me se hi meri behene aage aayegi or mujh jaisi ladki hifazat karegi tum jaise suaro se, kutto se, jaanwaro se...

Arti
Please… ruk jao… koi solution mil jaayega…

Rahat
Humein batao… bas ruk jao…

Ladki
(ghusse aur pain ke saath, crying)
Ab aur nahi! Sab dhokha dete hain! Koi nahi…
(Apne upar petrol dalti hai aur match se aag laga leti hai)

Anushka
(daudte hue)
Ruko!

Ishaani
(Rotate, shouting)
Hum yahan hain! Hum tumhari madad karenge!

Anisha
Haan! Please… ruk jao!

(Arti aur Rahat bhi daudte hue ladki ke paas pahunchte hain, bridge pe bheed ke beech me.)

Arti
Bas ruk jao… hum sab yahan hain…

Ladki
(Kuch seconds ke liye unki aankhon me dekh kar, phir jump)
20 saal ki umar me… aur bas…
(Bridge se kood deti hai)

(Arti apne muh par haath rakhti hai, aankhon me aansu. Rahat bridge se niche dekh rahi hai, shock me, mouth open. Anushka, Ishaani aur Anisha bhi us ladki ki taraf daudti hain, par ladki kood chuki hoti hai.)

Anushka
(whisper, trembling)
No… ye nahi ho sakta…

Ishaani
Mere aankhon ke saamne…

Anisha
Hum kuch nahi kar paye…

Charo taraf bhid thi, or bahut sara shor... Camera dron view de raha tha... Niche samudra ki uthal puthal or bridge ke upar security officer ka jamawda... Or ek ariel shot or flashback end...

SCENE – LIBRARY – FLASHBACK YAAD KARTE HUE


(5 girls library me table par bethi hain, laddu ke saath, par atmosphere heavy aur silent hai. Sab serious expression me.)

Arti
(softly, laddu ko dekhte hue)
Yaad hai wo din… bridge par… us ladki ke saath jo hum sab ke saamne…

Rahat
(ghusse aur dard ke saath)
20 saal ki umar me… helpless… aur hum wahan sirf khade dekh rahe the.

Anushka
(Murmuring)
Main soch bhi nahi sakti… agar hum thodi der late hote… ya nahi aate…

Ishaani
Uski aankhon me pain, frustration… aur duniya ke khilaf narazgi… wo hum sab ke saamne kood gayi.

Anisha
Aur hum sab… helpless… kuch nahi kar paye…

Arti
(haath apne muh par rakhte hue, aankhon me aansu)
Bas tab se… maine decide kiya… ki main kisi ladki ko kabhi akela nahi rehne dungi…

Rahat
(Halki si awaaz me, lekin firm)
Main bhi… apne aap se vaada karti hoon… ki kabhi koi ladki humare samaj me help ke liye akeli nahi rahegi.

Anushka
(Main soch kar, determination ke saath)
Main bhi… koi bhi ladki danger me ho… main use bachane ke liye khadi rahungi.

Ishaani
Aur main… hamesha unke liye ladungi jo khud se ya duniya se fight kar rahi hain.

Anisha
Aur main bhi… apne aap se vaada karti hoon… ki hum sab ladkiyon ka saath denge… chahe kuch bhi ho.

Arti
(ghusse aur dard ke saath)
Aur isi vaade ke saath… humara group bana.
Humne decide kiya… ki ladkiyon ko kabhi helpless nahi rehne denge.

Rahat
(Haalat ko absorb karte hue)
Bas… tab se… yeh hamara mission hai.

(5 girls ek dusre ki taraf dekh kar, silent nods aur determination ke saath, table ke upar laddu ke saath haath mila kar vaada karte hain. Scene heavy aur emotional, koi hansi-mazaak nahi.)

In sab ke baad Arti sab ko Good bye hug deti hai or gifts or mithaai Diwali special... Or sab ladkiya apne apne kaam ke liye nikal jati hai...

SCENE – PRESENT DAY – ISHAANI – TAXI ME

(Background: Ishaani taxi me baithi hai, city ke traffic aur lights ke beech. Diwali ka festive vibe hai, par uske chehre pe focused aur determined expression.)

Ishaani (monologue)

Aaj ka din… chhoti si Diwali celebration, gifts aur mithai ke saath. Girls khush, Arti ke efforts dikh rahe hain… aur main taxi me baithi, apni duniya me lost.

Main Ishaani… part-time restaurant me waitress aur professional model. Kaam? Har ek customer ke saath patience, har ek order perfection ke saath. Modeling me discipline aur confidence — dono jagah mujhe independent banate hain. Lekin yeh independence ka matlab sirf apne liye nahi… har ladki ke liye bhi courage ka signal hai.

Mera nature… bold, confident, aur fearless. Lekin aware bhi — aware ki har decision ka impact hota hai. Aur isi awareness ke saath, main Behen_Code group me apna role nibhati hoon. Har mission me, chahe situation tense ho, main fully present hoon. Kyunki humari responsibilities sirf individual nahi… humari group ke saath judti hain.

Sapne… haan, mere apne bhi hain. Professional modeling me aage badhna, apni identity establish karna, aur ek din restaurant aur modeling dono me balance create karna. Par mere sapne meaningful tab hain jab main ladkiyon ke liye kuch kar rahi hoon — unke liye stand lena, unhe protect karna, unki safety ensure karna.

Yeh dedication… mera passion… aur mera commitment… sab ek hi jagah meet karte hain. Chahe ek chhoti si fight ho, ya koi mission… main hamesha ready hoon.

Taxi ke window se lights aur traffic dekh kar, main decide karti hoon…
Main apni independence ke saath fearless bhi hoon, aur apne group ke liye fully committed.

Har ladki ke liye jo helpless hai… main wahan khadi hoon.

SCENE – PRESENT DAY – ISHAANI – RESTAURANT


(Restaurant me thodi hustle-bustle, background me halki music aur clatter of plates. Ishaani apron me busy hai.)

Customer 1
Excuse me… extra cheese pizza chahiye, aur jaldi please.

Ishaani
(smiling, professional tone)
Ji, bilkul! Jaldi arrange kar deti hoon.

(Customer ke order ke liye note karti hai, aur chef ke paas chali jaati hai.)

Ishaani
Chef, extra cheese pizza, table 5 ke liye, jaldi!

Chef
On it!

(Ishaani phir next table par jaati hai.)

Customer 2
Madam, pasta me thoda kam spice ho… aur thoda garlic add kar do.

Ishaani
(smiling, confident)
Bilkul sir, customize kar deti hoon.

(Uske actions me speed, professionalism aur focus dikh raha hai. Table se plate serve karte hue, customers ke saath friendly interaction, lekin fully attentive.)

Customer 3
Wow, aapka service kaafi smooth hai… aur aap ka smile bhi amazing hai.

Ishaani
(Halki si muskaan)
Thank you sir, bas ensure karna hai ki aap satisfied rahe.

(Ishaani order serve karte hue phir kitchen ke corner me jaati hai, staff ke saath coordinate karti hai. Har kaam me precision aur dedication hai.)

Ishaani
(Half whisper to herself)
Har plate… har order… perfection… yehi meri strength hai.

(Background me restaurant ki hustle aur lights, Ishaani focused, confident, aur fully engaged apne kaam me.)

SCENE – ARTI’S LIBRARY – DAYTIME

(Background: soft instrumental music, shaant environment. Diwali ke agle din ka dopahar hai. Arti apni library ke andar hai — wooden shelves, old books ki khushboo, sunlight ke soft streaks glass window se andar aa rahe hain.)

(Arti ne light-colored cotton saree pehni hai, baalon ko neatly bandha hua hai. Table par ek register, pen aur kuch open books pade hain.)

(Arti apna routine ka kaam kar rahi hai — systematically, disciplined manner me.)

(Visuals slow-motion style me — camera uske movements par focus karta hai.)

Arti shelf ke paas jaakar ek ek book dust kar rahi hai,
phir unhe alphabetical order me rakhte hue softly titles padhti hai.

Arti
(halki muskaan ke saath, apne aap se)
“Kal jitna mess hua tha, aaj sab kuch perfect karna hi padega…”

(Wo ek notebook khol kar register me kuch entry karti hai — dates, codes, aur borrowed books ke details.)

Phir ek corner me rakhi kuch purani magazines ko shuffle karti hai,
aur ek new arrival section me titles ko label lagane lagti hai.

Sab kuch usual lag raha tha…
par phir usse mehsoos hota hai —
kisi ki nazar, koi usse dekh raha hai.

(Background music halka sa intense hota hai.)

Arti thodi der ke liye pen rok deti hai,
aur bina seedha dekhe, aankhon ke kone se aas-paas ke environment ko sense karti hai.

Shelf ke dusre corner me, ek young ladka khada hai — college-going age ka,
simple jeans-shirt me, bag shoulder par.
Uski aankhein Arti par tikki hui hain.

Wo ladka jaise library me book dhoondhne ke bahane se aaya ho,
par asal me uska dhyaan Arti par hi hai.

Arti register me likhne ka drama karti hai,
par andar se clearly feel karti hai —
“yeh ladka mujhe hi dekh raha hai.”

Uska pen ek second ke liye rukta hai,
wo sir uthakar seedha dekhti hai —
aur unki aankhein takra jaati hain.

(Short silence. Background me ek clock tick kar rahi hai.)

Ladka thoda awkwardly smile karta hai,
aur turant ek random shelf ki taraf dekhne lagta hai,
jaise koi normal reader ho.

Arti ke lips ke kone me ek faint sa expression — na smile, na surprise,
bas ek mature woman ka composed reaction.

Wo wapas apne register me likhne lagti hai,
lekin andar kahin ek thought chal raha hai —
“kaun hai yeh… aur mujhe dekh kar muskuraya kyu?”

(Camera slow zoom out — library ka calm ambience,
books ke beech ek silent nazar ka tukraav,
aur Arti ke chehre par ek thoughtful calmness.)

SCENE – RESTAURANT – EVENING


(Restaurant me evening rush hai. Lights thodi dim, halki soft music chal rahi hai. Tables occupied hain, laughter aur cutlery ki awaaz milke ek warm ambience bana rahi hai.)

(Ishaani counter ke paas standing pad le rahi hai — order slips, tray, aur plates ke beech me kaam me busy. Lekin tabhi entrance se kuch boys ka group andar aata hai — 5-6 college ke ladke, energetic, hansi mazak karte hue.)

(Usi group me ek ladka hai — curly hair, tall-dark, shoulders pe ek guitar bag, dusre haath me small sling bag.)

(Camera slow-motion me us par zoom karta hai. Uske aankhon me ek calm aura, smile casual, bina kisi attitude ke.)

(Ishaani us ladke ko dekhti hai… aur ek pal ke liye uske gestures ruk jaate hain.)

Uske haath me plate thi — wo halki si tilt hoti hai, lekin wo sambhal leti hai,
phir aankhon se chhupke corner se ek aur baar dekhti hai…
wo ladka apne doston ke saath baith gaya tha, aur Ishaani ke dil ki dhadkane badh jaati hain.

Narration / Monologue tone (soft)
Haan, sahi suna… Ishaani ka dil isi ladke ke liye dhadakta hai.
Wo ladka, jise usne kabhi bataya nahi… kabhi samjhaya nahi… bas dekha hai, door se, chupke se.

(Wo ladka hasti hui baatein kar raha hai, uski aankhon me warmth hai.
Ishaani apne kaam me busy hone ki acting karti hai, par har dusre second uski nazar wapas us table par chali jaati hai.)

(Unme se ek ladka loudly waiter ko bulaata hai —)

Boy 1
Waiter! Bhaiyya, order lena yaar… waiter!

(Restaurant me thoda noise create hota hai. Manager counter ke peeche se observe karta hai.)

Manager
(thoda irritated, softly under his breath)
Yeh Ishaani us table pe khadi kyun nahi ja rahi…

(Manager ka dhyaan jaata hai Ishaani par, jo clearly us table ke side me khadi hai — lekin apne crush wale ladke ko dekhte hue lost hai.)

Manager
(stern tone me)
Ishaani… table 9. Customers bula rahe hain.

(Ishaani thoda jhijakti hai, aankhon me ek awkward panic, jaise reality me wapas aayi ho.)

Ishaani
(quickly composed hote hue)
Uh… ji sir, abhi ja rahi hoon.

(Wo tray uthati hai, apna expression control karne ki koshish karti hai. Lekin uske chehre ka halka sa blush aur aankhon ka sparkle sab kuch bata rahe the —
ki yeh koi random customer nahi… yeh uske dil ka silent hero hai.)

(Camera close-up: Ishaani ek deep breath leti hai, khud se softly bolti hai —)

Ishaani
(under her breath, soft smile ke saath)
Bas normal behave kar Ishaani… normal…

(Phir wo apne professional smile ke saath us table ki taraf
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