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(This post was last modified: 9 hours ago by Demeter. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
My passion for the world of erotic literature and short stories has existed for decades.
I have discovered works that deserve the rating ‘excellent’, while others I have read can be described as mediocre to poor at best.
However, this story deserves the rating ‘excellent’ in all categories and is unique.
Needless to say, I would have taken note of it with goodwill and welcomed it with pleasure if the author had been willing to write a ‘fourth chapter’
containing a summary of the experiencess and detailed explanations of the events described incompletely or not at all in the previous chapters.
The following scenes are examples: the scene in the train's washroom, Meera's first encounter with Ashish, and a detailed description of Meera's
first anal experience with Mr. Das. The development of the child of Krish and Nikita (Mr. Das' sister-in-law) should also be mentioned.
There are a number of other events that, in my opinion, are mentioned but lack in-depth treatment.
Therefore, it would be highly desirable to write a ‘fourth chapter’ of the story, which would most certainly delight the thousands of fans.
My appeal to the author Krish_999 is:
Take this story to its zenith and crown it!
Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter
I have discovered works that deserve the rating ‘excellent’, while others I have read can be described as mediocre to poor at best.
However, this story deserves the rating ‘excellent’ in all categories and is unique.
Needless to say, I would have taken note of it with goodwill and welcomed it with pleasure if the author had been willing to write a ‘fourth chapter’
containing a summary of the experiencess and detailed explanations of the events described incompletely or not at all in the previous chapters.
The following scenes are examples: the scene in the train's washroom, Meera's first encounter with Ashish, and a detailed description of Meera's
first anal experience with Mr. Das. The development of the child of Krish and Nikita (Mr. Das' sister-in-law) should also be mentioned.
There are a number of other events that, in my opinion, are mentioned but lack in-depth treatment.
Therefore, it would be highly desirable to write a ‘fourth chapter’ of the story, which would most certainly delight the thousands of fans.
My appeal to the author Krish_999 is:
Take this story to its zenith and crown it!
Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter


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