27-10-2025, 01:10 AM 
		
	
	(26-10-2025, 09:07 PM)PELURI Wrote: "harsh white fading into warm amber"....omen of good things to come by...hopefully....too early might be though....wondering how the nature takes over the matured doc and the nubile siren...
Hi PELURI
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! I’m glad you are liking the story so far. I see what you mean about the pacing; I’ll keep an eye on how the story unfolds so that the developments between the doc and the Kavya feel natural.
Your curiosity about how nature takes over their dynamic is exactly the kind of feel I’m hoping to explore, so it’s encouraging to hear it sparked questions. Really appreciate you sharing your perspective!"
Once again thank you for your support.
With warm regards
-- Shailu


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