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Title: The Dowry of the Elder Sister
Character List
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The Bride's Family
The Groom's Family (from Punjab)
Here is a summary of the first 12 scenes of the story.
Scene 1: The Wedding Night Demand On the wedding night of Preet and Jeevan, the groom, Jeevan, halts the ceremony. He publicly reveals that the bride's father owes him a catastrophic financial debt that would ruin the family. He offers to cancel the debt on one condition: he must be allowed to marry both sisters, Preet and her older, already-married sister, Sukhmani.
Scene 2:The Choice The family's attempts to negotiate in private or offer more money are coldly rejected by Jeevan, who insists his only demand is Sukhmani. Trapped by her father's shame and her sister's terror, Sukhmani makes the decisive choice. She accepts Jeevan's proposal, announcing she will divorce her current husband, Rohan.
Scene 3: The Unholy Vows Jeevan immediately forces Sukhmani to sit in the mandap beside him and a weeping Preet. When the Priest refuses to perform the sinful ceremony, Jeevan blackmails him by threatening his temple's funding. Sukhmani, resigned, tells her mother that her first marriage was passionless and this act is a sacrifice to save their family.
Scene 4: The Unholy Pheras Jeevan breaks tradition by leading both sisters around the holy fire, whispering possessively to Sukhmani that she is his. He applies the sindoor (vermilion) to Preet quickly, then performs the ritual on Sukhmani with deliberate care, calling her his "true prize" before the horrified guests.
Scene 5: The Promise Jeevan tells Sukhmani he has saved her from her "asshole" husband and promises to keep both sisters happy. He then announces it is time for the bidaai (farewell) for both of them, dismissing the family's concerns about society and Sukhmani's husband.
Scene 6: Jeevan calls for his Fortuner and dictates the seating arrangement: Sukhmani on one side, Preet on the other, with him sitting possessively in the middle. He drives away from the wedding hall with his two new wives.
Scene 7: The Journey Home In the car, Sukhmani asks what she should tell her husband, Rohan. Jeevan laughs, takes her phone, and sends a text from her number telling Rohan she is leaving him for a "real man." He asserts his total control, stating he now "owns" Sukhmani, just as he owns her father.
Scene 8: The Farmhouse They arrive at Jeevan's secluded farmhouse, where he announces that all three of them will be spending the Suhagraat (wedding night) together in the master bedroom. When Sukhmani demands a separate room, Jeevan gives her a final, cruel ultimatum: share his bed, or he will have her father arrested by morning.
Scene 9: A Sister's Plea As they walk to the house, Preet pulls Sukhmani aside and begs her to agree to Jeevan's terms. Preet, surprisingly, argues that Jeevan must truly "love" Sukhmani to go to such lengths and that he is "way better than Rohan." She confesses she is terrified to be alone with Jeevan and needs Sukhmani with her for protection.
Scene 10: The Golden Cage Inside the house, Jeevan's demeanor changes to that of a calm, charming husband. He assigns their roles: Sukhmani, as the "elder mistress," will manage the household, while Preet will "take care of" him personally. He states he is a loving husband, but only to wives who are "loyal and obedient."
Scene 11: The Arrangement In the master bedroom, Jeevan explains the logistics for the night. When Sukhmani asks where they will all sleep, he confirms his "arrangement": he will sleep in the middle of the large bed, with Preet on his left and Sukhmani on his right.
Scene 12: The Proof As he prepares to leave them to change, Sukhmani boldly challenges him, asking if he thinks he is man enough to sexually "satisfy both" of them. In response, Jeevan smiles, unties his pajamas, and reveals his massive erection, proving he is more than ready.
Scene 1: The Wedding Night Demand
At Grand wedding Hall, The wedding ceremony had paused, an unspoken quiet falling over the guests. Jeevan, the groom, stood before the elders, his face unreadable.
Jeevan: "Forgive me, elders, for halting these sacred rites. But there is a matter of great importance that must be addressed before we proceed." Mujhe maaf karna, bade buzurgo, in pavitra riti-rivajon ko rokne ke liye. Lekin ek bahut zaroori baat hai jise aage badhne se pehle suljhana hoga.
A nervous murmur went through the crowd. Preet, the young bride, looked up at Jeevan, her eyes wide with fear.
Elder 1: "What is it, Jeevan? Has something gone amiss?" Kya hua, Jeevan? Kya kuch galat ho gaya hai?
Jeevan: "Indeed, something has. My esteemed father-in-law, your hands are not as clean as they appear. There is a debt, a significant one, that remains unpaid." Haan, kuch toh hai. Mere sammanit sasur ji, aapke haath utne saaf nahi hain jitne dikhte hain. Ek karz hai, ek bahut bada karz, jo abhi tak chukaya nahi gaya hai.
The bride's father, a once-proud man, visibly flinched, his face paling.
Bride's Father: "What... what are you talking about, Jeevan? There is no debt!" Kya... kya baat kar rahe ho, Jeevan? Koi karz nahi hai!
Jeevan: "Oh, but there is. A debt so vast, so politically and financially crippling, that its exposure would shatter your family's honor and business into a million pieces. A debt that would leave you with nothing but shame." Oh, lekin hai. Ek karz itna vishal, itna rajnitik aur vittiya roop se ghatak, ki agar uska khulasa ho gaya toh aapke parivar ki izzat aur vyapar lakhon tukdon mein bikhar jayega. Ek karz jo aapko sirf sharmindagi ke alava kuch nahi dega.
Sukhmani, the older sister, stepped forward, her eyes narrowing at Jeevan. She was a woman of striking beauty, her presence commanding.
Sukhmani: "What is this nonsense, Jeevan? Are you trying to shame our family on my sister's wedding day?" Yeh kya bakwaas hai, Jeevan? Kya tum meri behen ki shaadi ke din hamare parivar ko sharminda karne ki koshish kar rahe ho?
Jeevan: "Nonsense? I assure you, Sukhmani, this is very real. And I am willing to forgive this debt, to save your family from utter ruin, but only under one condition." Bakwaas? Main tumhe yakeen dilata hoon, Sukhmani, yeh bahut sach hai. Aur main is karz ko maaf karne ko taiyar hoon, tumhare parivar ko poori tarah se barbaadi se bachane ke liye, lekin sirf ek shart par.
He paused, letting his gaze sweep over Preet, then linger on Sukhmani.
Jeevan: "I will marry Preet. And I will also marry you, Sukhmani. Both sisters will be my wives." Main Preet se shaadi karunga. Aur main tumse bhi shaadi karunga, Sukhmani. Dono behenen meri patniyan hongi.
A collective gasp echoed through the hall. Preet let out a small sob. Sukhmani’s eyes blazed with a mix of shock and defiance.
Sukhmani: "Are you insane? I am already married!" Kya tum pagal ho? Main pehle se shadi-shuda hoon!
Jeevan: "That, my dear Sukhmani, can be rectified. Your husband is not here, is he? You will divorce him. And you will become my wife, alongside your sister. This is my demand. Take it, or watch your father's world crumble." Woh, meri pyari Sukhmani, theek kiya ja sakta hai. Tumhara pati yahan nahi hai, hai na? Tum usse talaq dogi. Aur tum meri patni banogi, apni behen ke saath. Yeh meri maang hai. Ise maano, ya apne pita ki duniya ko toot-te dekho.
Character List
=========
The Bride's Family
- Sukhmani (The Elder Sister)
- Age: 32
- Parents: Sardar Bhupinder Singh (Father) and Manjeet Kaur (Mother)
- Husband: Rohan (Age: 35) - Her current, "passionless" husband.
- Age: 32
- Preet (The Younger Sister / The Bride)
- Age: 21
- Parents: Sardar Bhupinder Singh (Father) and Manjeet Kaur (Mother)
- Husband: Jeevan (Age: 36) - Her new husband from the wedding.
- Age: 21
- Sardar Bhupinder Singh (The Father)
- Age: 58
- Wife: Manjeet Kaur (Age: 55)
- Note: He is the one who owes Jeevan the massive debt.
- Age: 58
- Manjeet Kaur (The Mother)
- Age: 55
- Husband: Sardar Bhupinder Singh (Age: 58)
- Age: 55
The Groom's Family (from Punjab)
- Jeevan (The Groom)
- Age: 36
- Parents: Sardar Balwinder Singh (Father) and Jaswinder Kaur (Mother)
- Wives:
- Preet (Age: 21) - His new, official bride.
- Sukhmani (Age: 32) - His demanded "second wife" and the object of his obsession.
- Preet (Age: 21) - His new, official bride.
- Age: 36
- Sardar Balwinder Singh (Jeevan's Father)
- Age: 62
- Wife: Jaswinder Kaur (Age: 60)
- Age: 62
- Jaswinder Kaur (Jeevan's Mother)
- Age: 60
- Husband: Sardar Balwinder Singh (Age: 62)
- Age: 60
Here is a summary of the first 12 scenes of the story.
Scene 1: The Wedding Night Demand On the wedding night of Preet and Jeevan, the groom, Jeevan, halts the ceremony. He publicly reveals that the bride's father owes him a catastrophic financial debt that would ruin the family. He offers to cancel the debt on one condition: he must be allowed to marry both sisters, Preet and her older, already-married sister, Sukhmani.
Scene 2:The Choice The family's attempts to negotiate in private or offer more money are coldly rejected by Jeevan, who insists his only demand is Sukhmani. Trapped by her father's shame and her sister's terror, Sukhmani makes the decisive choice. She accepts Jeevan's proposal, announcing she will divorce her current husband, Rohan.
Scene 3: The Unholy Vows Jeevan immediately forces Sukhmani to sit in the mandap beside him and a weeping Preet. When the Priest refuses to perform the sinful ceremony, Jeevan blackmails him by threatening his temple's funding. Sukhmani, resigned, tells her mother that her first marriage was passionless and this act is a sacrifice to save their family.
Scene 4: The Unholy Pheras Jeevan breaks tradition by leading both sisters around the holy fire, whispering possessively to Sukhmani that she is his. He applies the sindoor (vermilion) to Preet quickly, then performs the ritual on Sukhmani with deliberate care, calling her his "true prize" before the horrified guests.
Scene 5: The Promise Jeevan tells Sukhmani he has saved her from her "asshole" husband and promises to keep both sisters happy. He then announces it is time for the bidaai (farewell) for both of them, dismissing the family's concerns about society and Sukhmani's husband.
Scene 6: Jeevan calls for his Fortuner and dictates the seating arrangement: Sukhmani on one side, Preet on the other, with him sitting possessively in the middle. He drives away from the wedding hall with his two new wives.
Scene 7: The Journey Home In the car, Sukhmani asks what she should tell her husband, Rohan. Jeevan laughs, takes her phone, and sends a text from her number telling Rohan she is leaving him for a "real man." He asserts his total control, stating he now "owns" Sukhmani, just as he owns her father.
Scene 8: The Farmhouse They arrive at Jeevan's secluded farmhouse, where he announces that all three of them will be spending the Suhagraat (wedding night) together in the master bedroom. When Sukhmani demands a separate room, Jeevan gives her a final, cruel ultimatum: share his bed, or he will have her father arrested by morning.
Scene 9: A Sister's Plea As they walk to the house, Preet pulls Sukhmani aside and begs her to agree to Jeevan's terms. Preet, surprisingly, argues that Jeevan must truly "love" Sukhmani to go to such lengths and that he is "way better than Rohan." She confesses she is terrified to be alone with Jeevan and needs Sukhmani with her for protection.
Scene 10: The Golden Cage Inside the house, Jeevan's demeanor changes to that of a calm, charming husband. He assigns their roles: Sukhmani, as the "elder mistress," will manage the household, while Preet will "take care of" him personally. He states he is a loving husband, but only to wives who are "loyal and obedient."
Scene 11: The Arrangement In the master bedroom, Jeevan explains the logistics for the night. When Sukhmani asks where they will all sleep, he confirms his "arrangement": he will sleep in the middle of the large bed, with Preet on his left and Sukhmani on his right.
Scene 12: The Proof As he prepares to leave them to change, Sukhmani boldly challenges him, asking if he thinks he is man enough to sexually "satisfy both" of them. In response, Jeevan smiles, unties his pajamas, and reveals his massive erection, proving he is more than ready.
Scene 1: The Wedding Night Demand
At Grand wedding Hall, The wedding ceremony had paused, an unspoken quiet falling over the guests. Jeevan, the groom, stood before the elders, his face unreadable.
Jeevan: "Forgive me, elders, for halting these sacred rites. But there is a matter of great importance that must be addressed before we proceed." Mujhe maaf karna, bade buzurgo, in pavitra riti-rivajon ko rokne ke liye. Lekin ek bahut zaroori baat hai jise aage badhne se pehle suljhana hoga.
A nervous murmur went through the crowd. Preet, the young bride, looked up at Jeevan, her eyes wide with fear.
Elder 1: "What is it, Jeevan? Has something gone amiss?" Kya hua, Jeevan? Kya kuch galat ho gaya hai?
Jeevan: "Indeed, something has. My esteemed father-in-law, your hands are not as clean as they appear. There is a debt, a significant one, that remains unpaid." Haan, kuch toh hai. Mere sammanit sasur ji, aapke haath utne saaf nahi hain jitne dikhte hain. Ek karz hai, ek bahut bada karz, jo abhi tak chukaya nahi gaya hai.
The bride's father, a once-proud man, visibly flinched, his face paling.
Bride's Father: "What... what are you talking about, Jeevan? There is no debt!" Kya... kya baat kar rahe ho, Jeevan? Koi karz nahi hai!
Jeevan: "Oh, but there is. A debt so vast, so politically and financially crippling, that its exposure would shatter your family's honor and business into a million pieces. A debt that would leave you with nothing but shame." Oh, lekin hai. Ek karz itna vishal, itna rajnitik aur vittiya roop se ghatak, ki agar uska khulasa ho gaya toh aapke parivar ki izzat aur vyapar lakhon tukdon mein bikhar jayega. Ek karz jo aapko sirf sharmindagi ke alava kuch nahi dega.
Sukhmani, the older sister, stepped forward, her eyes narrowing at Jeevan. She was a woman of striking beauty, her presence commanding.
Sukhmani: "What is this nonsense, Jeevan? Are you trying to shame our family on my sister's wedding day?" Yeh kya bakwaas hai, Jeevan? Kya tum meri behen ki shaadi ke din hamare parivar ko sharminda karne ki koshish kar rahe ho?
Jeevan: "Nonsense? I assure you, Sukhmani, this is very real. And I am willing to forgive this debt, to save your family from utter ruin, but only under one condition." Bakwaas? Main tumhe yakeen dilata hoon, Sukhmani, yeh bahut sach hai. Aur main is karz ko maaf karne ko taiyar hoon, tumhare parivar ko poori tarah se barbaadi se bachane ke liye, lekin sirf ek shart par.
He paused, letting his gaze sweep over Preet, then linger on Sukhmani.
Jeevan: "I will marry Preet. And I will also marry you, Sukhmani. Both sisters will be my wives." Main Preet se shaadi karunga. Aur main tumse bhi shaadi karunga, Sukhmani. Dono behenen meri patniyan hongi.
A collective gasp echoed through the hall. Preet let out a small sob. Sukhmani’s eyes blazed with a mix of shock and defiance.
Sukhmani: "Are you insane? I am already married!" Kya tum pagal ho? Main pehle se shadi-shuda hoon!
Jeevan: "That, my dear Sukhmani, can be rectified. Your husband is not here, is he? You will divorce him. And you will become my wife, alongside your sister. This is my demand. Take it, or watch your father's world crumble." Woh, meri pyari Sukhmani, theek kiya ja sakta hai. Tumhara pati yahan nahi hai, hai na? Tum usse talaq dogi. Aur tum meri patni banogi, apni behen ke saath. Yeh meri maang hai. Ise maano, ya apne pita ki duniya ko toot-te dekho.
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