[cooldood1723]

Hello Sriya Madam, I read your story and I would say it's too good.
But sometime it feels like you are behaving like Tele drama director, who stretches the stroy unnecessarily.
I mean it's an adult story and that's why there should not be place of a college girl admission bcoz it doesn't make any sensee with the story and it's been more than 8 to 10 update Supriya has not been fucked by anyone, I mean it's not a serial drama.
Till Vikram, till mike seduction it was ok but as Isha called Her husband before getting marriage with Supriya from that point story has completely changed which was not much needed in the story.
And Iqbal has not fucked Supriya till today, it's unbelievable bcoz he is the only character who has a impressive cock and Supriya should have been addicted to his fuck but aapne Iqbal ki story ko bilkul innocent dikha diya.
I think story has been little bit offbeat now and you are introducing more nad more character which has not needed now bcoz you have already introduced more than required character.
I hope you won't mind my honest opinion but there should be emotional blackmail and a kind of lust in most of the update.
Rest is Ok and Love you due respect to you and to your art.
Thanks.

Absolutely right!!, Even I too pointed out earlier since seperation from Vikram the story has a lot of unnecessary characters, it has become more kind of dailyshop instead of an erotic story.. However still it's one of the best story at platform. But at the same time story had no sex episode since long time!! Hope to read sex seen asap