Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

Hi Shailu
The story is going very good. Wonderful narration.
This specific scene, there's a small mistake. You mentioned he stepped out of the elevator and after a few lines later you said he climbed the last few steps. There's a disconnect. Please fix this.
Overall, your writing is excellent
Please keep writing

Hi Prasanna

Thank you so much for your compliments.

Your compliments and support helps me keep going.

Thank you very much for pointing out that mistake. It was my mistake. That shows how closely you are reading the story. That means a lot to me.

I have addressed issue. I corrected the scene.

Once again, that you for your continued support.

With warm regards

-- Shailu