[tharkibudda]

My opinion is almost 2nd to khemucha. That -
1. Go by your pace - it's your story. Don't rush.

2. "Add more ways they do sex at home which Manav never knew."

3.  There is no point of adding more characters unless the plot demands.

And most importantly, a climax for the story you have ready in mind, right? A logical one? That's the main concern. As the number of good stories but unfinished, is pretty high here. Many writers just leave the plot mid-way. So, please make sure that the climax of the story is well thought and done well in advance, and then the story unravels slowly with that kept in mind.

You are doing a faveolus job. Really enjoying your writing. Keep up the good work.  

Thanks for ur feedback

1. Go by your pace - it's your story. Don't rush.

Thanks I will go from now

2. "Add more ways they do sex at home which Manav never knew."

Yes that was initial plan but I thought if it might get repetitive 

3.  There is no point of adding more characters unless the plot demands.

Yes, the other characters come late but are needed