Adultery My wife through the lens of CCTV

[tharkibudda]

You've worked hard to develop the story so far. though a well written slow burn at just under one update per week always makes for a "dil maange more" vibe, I hope you don't screw up the story by fast forwarding the story. keep going the way you are going. don't think about the reader now. think about the reader who starts reading about two years - will that reader see erotica or smut. current readers are like beta version users - they get an early peak but suffer usage(reading) pains(delays). The best stories are read and remembered for years. Just don't abandon it. If life comes to a point where you feel, you can no longer give time to this, the announce the warp speed, fast forward and dump reveal the plot till the end nd bid goodbye. But not otherwise. So - add more ways they do sex at home the Manav never knew - is what I say.

Let the easter eggs hatch - one by one. She's only move to submissive participant. By the time she left Manav to "go home for a few weeks" she had moved way beyond submissive participant. You mention increased work travel for Manav - that implies sleepovers. There is a lot of lurid ground to cover. Cover it one patch at a time.

I hope the porn scenes are not rushed over. This is xossipy and is a platform for sharing pretty ribald stuff. That's why we are her. If we wanted rushed over sex scenes, we wood have gone to a bookstore for a paperback. So - go at the current pace where Manav discovers his wife becoming more direct and participating with Lakhan - is what I say .

Regarding a third or fourth person in this(their?) midst, I wish you had not asked this question. Writers like you should not ask this question. Stories die because of this question. Its your plot. You know where you want to take it. So why the question. Add whatever or whoever is essential to the plot, not  anyone more, not anyone less. Definitely not to add "variety", "spice", or body count. that would be fatal for the story. And anyway, you are pressed for time. Why go on side tracks. Se what happened to "Cheating Wife?" on this forum. started well, then added everyone and anyone from their postman to the granny college fried, and see where it is now - dead. The author seems to have no idea of how to collect ithe story togther again and quips inane things like "... there is no such thing as too many females."

To sum it up - Stay the course, buddy stay the course.

Though the transition has been building up, and the forced fellatio was not the trigger, but I do wish it had started after a vaginal copulation. She did not want it. she did not get moist thinking bout him. she was not blown over by his personality. he did not have a reputation - as far as she knew. but her body responded. that because there are nerve ending there that trigger pleasure and pain responses in the brain between her legs. There are no such nerve ending in the mouth. An oral violation is disgusting and dignity shattering experience for a girl with her background and can break her spirit. Sure it underlined her helplessness. But even granting all that, in my opinion it would have been better if the transition emerged after a vaginal intercouse rather than forced fellatio. The shock of the forced fellatio could takes weeks to recover from. As I said, just my opinion.

Thank You Khemucha for your analysis and others for echoing... its so refreshing you replied to my feedback request so soon.

My biggest fear is that I might have to abandon the story and leave it hanging in middle without a logical conclusion. Just like how the writer of "Shipra's ordeal" had to take a break and he was messaged continuously to come back.

I want to write in peace, as a hobby, as a therapy, but not with continous feedback from others.So I thought should i keep continuing another 15 to 20 chapters of just Dhristi and Lakhan go through various levels of sex and would the readers find it stuck with no plot...

thats why i raised this question because I've plans for a lot of easter eggs including that missing file... The plot goes through a path i had defined before but I just wanted to know if people dont feel continous sex would be a speed breaker.

I hope the porn scenes are not rushed over. This is xossipy and is a platform for sharing pretty ribald stuff. That's why we are her. If we wanted rushed over sex scenes, we wood have gone to a bookstore for a paperback.

I'm happy that if other readers have the same attitude because a lot of them feel bored that its the same two people just another day, another setting

Definitely not to add "variety", "spice", or body count. that would be fatal for the story. And anyway, you are pressed for time. Why go on side tracks.

The next person would be important for the plot. The only time I might go for side track is if i had to explore the previous tenant wife which I'll do as a separate spinoff if needed. but not in here

Though the transition has been building up, and the forced fellatio was not the trigger, but I do wish it had started after a vaginal copulation

Her felattio has a meaning which will be revealed in next few chapters...

To sum it up - Stay the course, buddy stay the course.

Thanks I got overwhelmed because of the lack of time and update comments so i felt if I might ever finish. So I will go my own pace even if it means abandoning it and then restarting later