[ray.rowdy]

Feedback Time

As I have told before ,this story is a slow burner and I took time to establish the plot,setting,characters before I introduced sex. I wanted it to be different from the other sex stories where women eagerly cheat on their husbands at the drop of the hat. 

I took time to establish how Dhristi despite getting better sex wasnt happy with what Lakhan did to her and tried her best to resist. The previous 2 chapters highlighted the difference between the sex and how Dhristi feels inadequate with her current life.

Now that she is looking forward for Lakhan, should I fast forward the episodes or should i add more ways they do sex at home which Manav never knew.

I've given few easter eggs before on what all things Lakhan tried with Dhristi which Manav didnt know at that.

I dont want people to feel like the Nukkad guys of Shiprat where every 5 chapters a new guy was introduced and he force her and she allows him. Atleast she was a NRI wife so had the time to write but I dont have.

Whats ur next direction u expect from the story? Porn scenes rushed over to reveal the plot until the end or go at the current pace where Manav discovers his wife becoming more direct and participating with Lakhan. Also do u want a third or fourth person in this midst?

She moved from reluctance to a submissive participant.

My opinion is almost 2nd to khemucha. That -
1. Go by your pace - it's your story. Don't rush.

2. "Add more ways they do sex at home which Manav never knew."

3.  There is no point of adding more characters unless the plot demands.

And most importantly, a climax for the story you have ready in mind, right? A logical one? That's the main concern. As the number of good stories but unfinished, is pretty high here. Many writers just leave the plot mid-way. So, please make sure that the climax of the story is well thought and done well in advance, and then the story unravels slowly with that kept in mind.

You are doing a faveolus job. Really enjoying your writing. Keep up the good work.