Adultery Priya Didi

[prasannas2001]

Saturday Morning – Arrival at Flat 401


Ravi stepped out of the elevator, his pulse a little quicker as he made his way up to the fourth floor.

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He climbed the last few steps to the fourth floor, each step echoing in the stillness of the morning.

Hi Shailu
The story is going very good. Wonderful narration.
This specific scene, there's a small mistake. You mentioned he stepped out of the elevator and after a few lines later you said he climbed the last few steps. There's a disconnect. Please fix this.
Overall, your writing is excellent
Please keep writing