16-10-2025, 11:19 PM
After reading the first three chapters, I can say the following:
An interesting start that suggests we readers will enjoy reading it, as it captivates us right from the start with an exciting story.
However, it also requires readers to be fully engaged in order to maximise the enjoyment, otherwise we run the risk of losing the thread and getting lost in the jumps in time and the phases that are distant from each other in terms of location.
The dialogues are very well written.
Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter
An interesting start that suggests we readers will enjoy reading it, as it captivates us right from the start with an exciting story.
However, it also requires readers to be fully engaged in order to maximise the enjoyment, otherwise we run the risk of losing the thread and getting lost in the jumps in time and the phases that are distant from each other in terms of location.
The dialogues are very well written.
Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter
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