14-10-2025, 11:04 PM
(This post was last modified: 14-10-2025, 11:13 PM by DeanWinchester00007. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
This is Wonderful Update . I have read it thrice . The way you wrote The calm demeanor of SONA and her healing journey is just so good .
At the start of the UPDATE , The whole para of SONA making decision of what to do , Leaving Hemant and Moving in with MC VIKRAM was so stressful , Every line i was like please dont please dont hahahahha . The way it was written I kind of already accepted that shit She is gonna move in VIKRAM and it will fucked up the little hope that is left , I was feeling so Sad about it , But then The Lady Gang came to the rescue .
To be honest This is very rare in EROTIC STORY , where Women are doing some thing Logical and right thing , and actually saving their friend instead of being Home wrecker . Hahahahha
Though her whole healing journey was shown in single update , but It took her many WEEKS to heal and see the fault of her action . It does not happened over night . Which is why she was so confidence and at peace . Though I wanted her to stand up to HEMANT while He was making absurd remark but Then It is understandable . She loves him and The part of her healing also include to Accept the damage she did to him .
Hemant was so pissed , Such a comedic relief while reading her reaction . She also made a comment that He is more childish that his child . Lol . That was such good reply .
Now the Real SONA is coming out .
While reading the FIRST TIME . I thought that The BREAK UP scene was short , and needed more drama . But after reading again , I think that was right to not stretch the break up scene because Whatever THE MC VIKRAM and SONA had was not real and natural . There no true feelings no true emotions . It was all manipulating and web of lies , Their whole whatever they had was built on false emotions . So it was only right the break up should also be not the real break up . It is like waking up one day and not having any feelings for the person you claimed to be in love . No hate but No love just General feeling , like they are acquaintance and That is exactly what SONA did . NO drama no nothing NO bullshit Just Straight Forward truth and Left with Dignity . That was such mature writing . If i were you i would have fucked that scene with over drama
lol .
The Last para was Great . You gave her the MICHAEL KING TREATMENT , Great lines , Purpose , Badass one liner . I loved it .
But May be i missed something , How did SONA know about MEGHNA was her true enemy ? How did she know ?
Now VIKRAM will reveal his true face and will collude with MEGHNA . And now I think after knowing that ANJANA BAJAJ plan's fail and Her brother is hurt , It will make her more vicious and She and that other VILLAIN will escalate their plan to HURT HEMANT and SONA .
But this thing HEMANT is not ALONE . HIS LADY LUCK IS WITH HIM. HE WILL CONQUER ANYTHING NOW .
I just hope , The upcoming update contains more Blood and more Gore .
At the start of the UPDATE , The whole para of SONA making decision of what to do , Leaving Hemant and Moving in with MC VIKRAM was so stressful , Every line i was like please dont please dont hahahahha . The way it was written I kind of already accepted that shit She is gonna move in VIKRAM and it will fucked up the little hope that is left , I was feeling so Sad about it , But then The Lady Gang came to the rescue .
To be honest This is very rare in EROTIC STORY , where Women are doing some thing Logical and right thing , and actually saving their friend instead of being Home wrecker . Hahahahha
Though her whole healing journey was shown in single update , but It took her many WEEKS to heal and see the fault of her action . It does not happened over night . Which is why she was so confidence and at peace . Though I wanted her to stand up to HEMANT while He was making absurd remark but Then It is understandable . She loves him and The part of her healing also include to Accept the damage she did to him .
Hemant was so pissed , Such a comedic relief while reading her reaction . She also made a comment that He is more childish that his child . Lol . That was such good reply .
Now the Real SONA is coming out .
While reading the FIRST TIME . I thought that The BREAK UP scene was short , and needed more drama . But after reading again , I think that was right to not stretch the break up scene because Whatever THE MC VIKRAM and SONA had was not real and natural . There no true feelings no true emotions . It was all manipulating and web of lies , Their whole whatever they had was built on false emotions . So it was only right the break up should also be not the real break up . It is like waking up one day and not having any feelings for the person you claimed to be in love . No hate but No love just General feeling , like they are acquaintance and That is exactly what SONA did . NO drama no nothing NO bullshit Just Straight Forward truth and Left with Dignity . That was such mature writing . If i were you i would have fucked that scene with over drama
lol . The Last para was Great . You gave her the MICHAEL KING TREATMENT , Great lines , Purpose , Badass one liner . I loved it .
But May be i missed something , How did SONA know about MEGHNA was her true enemy ? How did she know ?
Now VIKRAM will reveal his true face and will collude with MEGHNA . And now I think after knowing that ANJANA BAJAJ plan's fail and Her brother is hurt , It will make her more vicious and She and that other VILLAIN will escalate their plan to HURT HEMANT and SONA .
But this thing HEMANT is not ALONE . HIS LADY LUCK IS WITH HIM. HE WILL CONQUER ANYTHING NOW .
I just hope , The upcoming update contains more Blood and more Gore .
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