Adultery The Swamiji

[shailu4ever]

hi..shailu ji....i am following all your stories...the concepts are always intriguing and promising...feel that introduction of too many characters simultaneously leads to certain characters being forgotten....slow fire built up is always enticing but too much slow permits diversion of readers interest....they are not held glued and captivated...atleast me...the erotica is often clumsy and therefore not titillating which is the purpose...my very personal opinions....many regards

Hi Peluri

Thank you very much for the candid feedback.  This really helps, that is why I stopped writing the story.

Warm regards

-- Shailu