13-10-2025, 03:07 AM
(This post was last modified: 13-10-2025, 06:55 PM by venkygeethu. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
First of all sorry for missing this wonderful story and by chance got into it. Really a wonderful narration inch by inch to take the readers wonderful situations and happenings. The name Geeta itself kindles my heart. The special touch of South Indian family blending is fabulous. The use of English Language shows your mastery. Though you have the scope of mixing your mother tongue which many writers do you have never done that Except that (Ra)it makes the English story readers like me to clearly understand the content. The characters are excellently created and the main characters Geetha and Bharat are really living in front of our eyes. The husband character is at the same time not to be neglected he too loves his wife and at the same time he gives freedom to his wife for the enjoyment. The Canada Trip is really going hotter and hotter . The thickness of the sperm shows that there is a hint of Bharat seeding his sperm in her womb for a child which Gautam garu lacks. Even Gautam has the opportunity to view live show between Geeta and Bharat . A good writer is the one who pleases his readers by narrating elaborately and giving big updates which you are already doing. Hats off for that
Wishing you to continue the story and let God shower His blessings to you to continue this story for pages and pages
Wishing you to continue the story and let God shower His blessings to you to continue this story for pages and pages


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