13-10-2025, 02:15 AM
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Great to read your plot and saga scenes shown ,i feel this is the only story which help readers to get an idea of the story in scene wise,it feels more exciting for we readers
Congratulations for putting up new story,can't wait to read the entire story seems the best one till date
Nice potential in the story, remarkable thinking and moments
Only request keep posting regular updates and lengthy one,
Also small request if u could keep Pratiksha shy as much as possible will feel more realistic and no need to keep her body yoga one , normal physique will work do pur done armpits seduction as well.
Thanks and all the best for an blaster story dear writer....
Congratulations for putting up new story,can't wait to read the entire story seems the best one till date
Nice potential in the story, remarkable thinking and moments
Only request keep posting regular updates and lengthy one,
Also small request if u could keep Pratiksha shy as much as possible will feel more realistic and no need to keep her body yoga one , normal physique will work do pur done armpits seduction as well.
Thanks and all the best for an blaster story dear writer....