12-10-2025, 08:30 PM
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(12-10-2025, 03:37 PM)Slayer@@ Wrote: The writing is outstanding.... But I didn't understand the characteristics of modhumita at a time he loves husband but at a time also wanna fuck dihan..... I thought this story gets a good novel writing but same shit adultry...the romantic side of husband was good but after next update for adultery purpose it's just thin.... I thought you make an good novel it's has a potential to be a great novel... But again same adultry story of cheating, no new all are past Xossip story are same format, some are exceptional... I thought your also ,but same wife doesn't not resistand later on the sister also join after for the sake of reader's..it will going to be a full blown same shit illogical orgy..... I really appreciate your writing but man use some logic I never wrote anyy review but your written is extraordinary ???but you just lost it with unrealistic or illogical writing for the future if the sister add to the adultry... But you are a good writer... It's your story so do it how you wanna shape it.. Best of ???... But don't do same Xossip shit with an end with an orgy...Thank you for your comment.
I just wanted to mention that the story comes from my imagination — I enjoy thinking about these kinds of scenes during my private, pleasurable moments ? lol.
So, naturally, it isn’t meant to be entirely realistic.
My main focus is on portraying Madhumita’s inner conflict — her struggle between lust and love.
I’m not sure if I’m doing it perfectly, but I’m trying my best to capture her turmoil.
Readers want to read explicit details most, this is a adultery, that's why sex is coming frequently.
And i can tell Mehul will appear in the story but won't join in sex, (if I tell more it will be a spoiler)
Also, the romantic relationship between husband and wife will remain the same.


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